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| Cole |
Post football. Post shower. Post lunch. We find each other
on the couch, and not because there is nothing to do, there
always is something else, but this is where we make right angles,
boneless fish prepped for the evening meal and later,
riding in the car, you'll tell me, next year, you'd rather play
soccer, for no particular reason other than preference & i
remind you, no matter what---
but for now, we share a pillow, television on, sun striping
the room & your still damp hair tickles my nose---our
hands glance, you grip my thumb then curl into my chest
like a knuckle, the briefest moment, of all our yesterdays
& tomorrows---
a pause in the flipbook, paper corner caught on a fingerprint
leaving little cuts, unfelt until your are long past
'you sure you don't want to do anything?'
'nah'
'ok'
& we settle comfortably in the space between stars

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Hank and Mary are worst
Nice little shared moment. Those are just so wonderful, aren't they?
The best moments can come from nothing at all
As long as reality tv isn't on at your hall
That would just be a disgrace haha
And it is alway nicer many a time to move at a slower pace
Best moments.
You have amazing eyes on your heart!
Lol at Pat. It is a good thing Gloria isn't awake so early.
Just saying, naps are good. I keep wondering why so many people do not know this, even though I only discovered them a few years ago. So nice to see the both of you always being so close. Enjoy!
God bless.
Those kind of times are so special...savor each second!!
Hugs
SUeAnn
Shared best moments
Are not that common
Glad it happens here
For what we hold dear
Hank
These are the moments we remember.
Those are the important moments and I see you know how to treasure them :-)
Oh for cryin' out loud! Quit making me emotional!!!
The grand and the glorious don't come frequently and are brief at best. It's the every day that lasts and sustains us through every day. Nicely said Brian!
What a beautiful "doing nothing" moment. At times, nothing is more than just nothing, well! I had a similar afternoon, all by self though... doing just about nothing...
Many hugs xoxo
wishing you a beautiful Sunday.
Such a cherished moment... I can feel the love.
I'm sure he'll change his mind again (b/t football & soccer) several times before next fall. = )
Precious moments your boy will never forget that he (they) were so well loved by their dad.
Precious.
It's good to be able to appreciate the times that matter as they come, not just in retrospect...thanks for sharing this one, bri--esp like the knuckle image.
love how you describe the moment...so precious..so much warmth..somehow they stay forever curled in our chests..even when grown up..
Such a beautiful moment, that I felt it!
An awesome moment with your son, love it.
What a beautiful sad reminder of how quickly they grow and precious each second is.
aw, you made me cry! He's at one of my favorite ages for boys...soak it in and remember...I know you are!
Lovely lovely. k.
Sweet space between stars- good for you for making room.
It really is a touching poem. Greetings.
I love that; encourage soccer. I worry about football and concussions!
Ahhhh...I love it! What a great dad you are.
Happy Week Brian, G
Those moments I will remember forever as well.
Thought to let you know I'm writing again... If'n you wanted to stop by. :)
What a special moment, Brian! Treasure it. Write about it. Savor it.
(As for Pat.....you beat me...I concede...)
Just being together is good enough. :)
Just being, on a Sunday. That's the good stuff.
A tender sweet write Brian ~ I love those moments specially curling into the chest like a knuckle ~
I had almost forgotton about these moments with my sons... but the small, quiet moments with my grandsons and your poem bring it all back.
Thanks...
I love when we dont make nothing special is lovely!!
LOL I love Cole:)
we could all use a few MORE unscheduled moments.
So lovely, the way sacred love is shared "in the space between the stars"-I love that. :)
Enjoy the closeness, just the way a father and son should be. Love the pause and the moment caught.
A cute moment of bonding.
One of those shared moments you'll always cherish. I'm glad to see that you had your poetic camera at the ready.
makes me want to cry because I am in that same stage of parenthood. What are we going to do when they are gone? :(
"the space between---"
"but for now, we share a pillow, television on, sun striping
the room & your still damp hair tickles my nose-
--our
hands glance, you grip my thumb then curl into my chest
like a knuckle, the briefest moment, of all our yesterdays
& tomorrows---"
Hi! Brian...
What a very "human" moment..."between" [a] father and [a] son...
Feeling shared "between" [a] father and [a]son...through your very descriptive, poetic words.
[Thanks,for sharing the picture Of your son Cole,in his foot-ball uniform.]
deedee :)
Thanks for sharing a lovely shared moment in verse.
warm and cosy place you have there...
'& we settle comfortably in the space between stars'
Perfect last line to a perfect moment.
Where's the tissues.... my eyes are moist.
"we settle comfortably in the space between stars "
The loveliest lines I have read in a long time.
Love those moments where nothing happens yet many things happen.
Joy always,
Susan
A perfect moment and how you deserve it :)
Those little moments are the best. And they will remember them the most.
What a pleasure to read your writing again. Good to see your boys through your eyes.
These are the moments we cannot memorialize when we are gone, or have lost a parent....but you have.
Write on, Dude!
Thank you for your welcoming comment,
Dianne
This is so tender Brian. I can relate to it so much after spending a few days with my grandson. Those little moments when we need to do nothing is when our hearts meld.
OH, how tender this is! Wonderful.
...those are the best moments:)
Love those little moments that don't require words...
:)
The quiet, simple moments can be the best. Cute pic in his uniform.
Special moments and memories made. Sometimes the actions we think are small mean so much to their little hearts. I love this....tender indeed.
"Unfelt until you are long past"...Trust me, those are the good times! lucky you...
Oh sweetness! That is the absolute best nothing to do. Love those moments where there's no self consciousness, just that little part of yourself and you, sitting in the stars :-) A precious piece. Really enjoyed this.
What sang right to my heart in this piece is the space you give him: to decide, to love, to simply be. It is a sacred gift.
Cole is a very handsome football player.
And I love how you capture life's little moments so perfectly.
Cheers, jj
Oh Brian! You and your kids are truly lucky.
This is a beautiful moment of father/son love. Wonderfully expressed Brian!
Oh,where are those moments now?
Great memory! Congrats..Well done.
seasideauthor no write today.
Just got back. So refreshing!
This was intimate and special~
I love the closeness n' the moment of between-it is where true magic lives! ;D
the sweetest...it's the little moments when we live in the present that bring us joy! i can feel the joy here!
Nice. I adore those sorts of moments with my kids.
this is a warm and fabulous moment in time!
Very tender. Makes me miss my boys very much. Thank you for sharing and sparking feeling and memory. :)
Boneless fish prepping for the meal gives me entirely the wrong idea, I suspect. Such a lazy fish, flopping around like that.
BIG HOT TEARS of that time that slips out of your hands, no matter how hard you grip.
Like trying to catch water.
Love this! The imagery is palpable!
i like the relation ship with ur son
enjoyed breezing thro your blog !
nothing better than the sofa after sports
Treasure those times. I wish that my dad had taken such an interest.
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