|restaurant step, Buchanan, VA|
'god does not like ugly,' a man
at the pool says to his daughters
& their friends, belly round and tan
thrust out like so many altars
where animals slain by butchers
appease angry dieties---ignorance,
of selfish man---i pray other authors
outweigh the scars your benev(i)olence
...has born upon their virgin skin
Over at dVerse Poets today, Gemma Wiseman is guest hosting for Gay and has us writing Huitains---as always i give my own little spin...adding the last line which is outside the form...also rather than sticking to either 8 or 10 syllables per line i mixed 10 & 8. Any way, she will open the doors at 3 pm.
At which time I will probably getting off from work...woohoo...smiles.
written in 55 words, cause that is what g-man forces us to do on fridays....smiles....