Christmas lights cast soft rainbows
on walls
on the floor
on everything
& we
On the couch, for what better place
to open presents,
Once the kids are sound asleep.
Ribbons & bows
round all i have,
all i am
& the tag reads
To: You
From: Me
And hea-ven
and heaven & nature sing
55 words & a story...so here you go G-man! Merry Christmas to all the 55ers!
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So sweet - happy almost Christmas!
Oh this is very good!
I see you over at Lorraine's blogs and thought I'd stop in.
Happy Un-wrapping....
I like this one a lot, Brian. The ending is very touching; and I get the meaning and smile!!
Aw, sweet.
My dh and I have never actually done that. The feeling is there, just not the ribbons.
Love this one!
what a delight, a pretty party of ribbons and presents:)
I fun little playfulness to this one
Unwrapping must be fun
Sure the anticipation is rising too
With Christmas almost due
Awww, a gentle and a bit sentimental one this time, Brian! Love it... you always surprise.
LOL Oooo naughty, naughty ...Love it.!
What Delightful Celebration,
your words sing.
well deserved of everything.
I can't even get up the spleen to holler Bah Humbug after that.
hehe...thank you day dreamer for saving me from thinking i was far too subtle with this...
a cheerful one, sexy and lovely :-)
Sweet and fun verse. Enjoyed it very much.
hmmm..sound like a lovely evening...smiles
I can't tell if this is meant to be sweet in a romantic sense or familial sense.
Very very sweet.
I hope at least the computer mouse is not stirring!
And also that your son is better. Sounds like it. K.
It's wonderful when all that needs to be said is "To: You From: Me".
I love sitting in the dark with no lights on...just the Christmas tree.
This is beautiful... the best present of all is spending an evening together.
Careful when you remove the tape! :-)
Perfectly romantic.
Sweet and romantic...but the ending gives you away..oh heaven indeed ~
Happy Sunday ~
what a pretty scenery, reads like a scene in a movie, and this rhymes homie :) he he he
thanks for the visit! enjoy your holiday!!!
aww sweet :)
got the receipt?
just kiddin'
...and heaven and nature Sing...hubba hubba!!
I think Santa's definitely coming!
LOL
Have a Happy :-) Sunday,
Have fun!
Gifts... tags... unwrapping.. excitement u just set the mood for Christmas :)
loved the pic u choose... light n lights !!!
## To: You
From: Me
And hea-ven
and heaven & nature sing ##
awesome lines !!
Love this special time of unwrapping...intimacy..special time of sharing together...that's what Christmas brings..the gift of love!
Brian,
It would be great anticipating the fun. Ribbons and wrapping papers get in the way for the impatient
Hank
Sweet!
Romance is in the air!
Love this one!
Hope your son is doing well.
you should be cloned
you had a ribbon around what? lol...
So cute.
I don't want to like this...I don't want to like this...I don't want to like this
Darn it.......I Like This
Peace
This really nice. I couldn't help but hear the music lightly playing at the end. :)
Nice, and as it should be!
The recipe for a warm and happy holiday season, especially if the gift keeps on giving *blush*
Love it...and love you! A fun gift to unwrap for sure
Oh, those magical Christmas moments :)
Subtle intimacy.
Wow. I really love this. You always amaze me. You are my favorite writer of modern day. True story Brian ; )
Wishing you the happiest Christmas season.
There is something magical about Christmas lights that can't help but make me smile. So did this.
jj
You're such a romantic. Mrs. Waystation is a lucky woman.
This made me quietly giggle.
SO CUTE....
How sweet!!
Brian that's lovely. :)
Brian, so sweet, in front of the tree and the kids asleep... very heartfelt and you made me tear up just a bit... for happy! Amy
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Hello Brian ... it's been a long time between visits & I hope this comment finds you, your boys and your beautiful wife all well. This little poem was quite sweet ... loved it! And I love the photo too.
Lovely. Simple but, Oh, so effective!
This one way really sweet :)
Christmas brings back a lot of old memories :)
enjoy :)
Lovely, Brian. What more can we give anyone, but ourselves. I love it!
I fear that the older we get.... ah well, I can dream, can't I?
Pure Christmas, beautiful my friend, beautiful
... just beautiful ...
What a fun piece! Fa la la la la.....!!
Hugs
SueAnn
hahaha I can just picture you sitting with all the ribbons
and then that singing quote at the end just tops it. Ha that says it all doesn't it. Don't give us further details ;). Enjoy
and now that song's stuck in my head
I think the gift was the break..the kids in bed, the dishes done and all the decorating over and then just you and the old lady.
fun piece... thanks
Such beautiful words and beautiful photo!
Have a happy week Brian!
So lovely! Those are the fun packages to unwrap! :)
and of course I scrolled down too far before, didn't I?? Dammit :) I commented on the wrong post...
Loved it :) So...CHRISTMASSY!!! :))
I love this. This may be my new favorite. :)
{blushing here}. Cool pic.
What a cozy, loving time you depict here. Guess we can all relate to those moments, but so glad you express them here in your inimitable style.
Light and bright and beautiful.
=)
Nice write. Love the tie in with the carol there. Nice job. Yes Christmas is getting very close, this piece does get one in the mood:)
you take my breath away.
way to go,
Merry Christmas!
u r the best.
Smiles!
woo hoo! this is wonderful! that's one hot red christmas!
Hopefully, all is as well as it is shown here.
No present is as precious as mutual understanding and embrace.
Happy Monday.
Thanks for being positive, caring, and thoughtful.
This piece is perfect and charming,
what a priceless creation.
your talent rocked here.
Your poem stirred THIS mouse!
I guess we both have love on our minds these days.;) And romance.;) What would life be without any of these, right?
So, from one hopeless romantic to another - never change.;) Your undying love for your wife is an inspiration.;)
xoxo
Well, the MOUSE might not be stirring, but something ELSE sure is! Ha ha! Loved it!
Nice. I like that To You From Me. And we know instinctively.
awe Brian is showing his feelings, and very well.. good one mate ;)
Brian...
You have something very special.
Your Family, and your huge Heart.
Live the Dream, and cherish every moment. You deserve all good things sent your way.
You are a good friend, God Bless you and your Family.
Have a Kick Ass Holiday
Merry Christmas
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