Saturday, December 31, 2011
On the eve of Another Tomorrow
Intention and actuality are distant shores,
the water betwixt full of pale & bloated floaters,
those that tried and drown,
whose hollow eyes question,
without sound
why, why, why
does this always happen to me?
Unwilling to see that some where between
the champagne flute, theirs lips
and the first year's kiss
they ain't foolin' no one but themselves.
"I hear you are good at scoring deals,"
a statement and question, she spins
like cinnamon buns, the day after Christmas
But she is right, I always check the clearance
aisle at Walmart, Kmart, Target
the bookstore, where ever
And you would be surprised what i find
no one else wants or they over stocked,
opportunity i ferret away throughout the year
in the basement closet for holidays,
birthdays, preparing for always, rainy days,
those when snow cocoons us in the house,
or just because days to say
"i love you," or make you feel special
Cause a penny saved is still a penny,
but added exponentially makes sense
which is not common and no one
asks the cost of a gift unless
that is where they find importance
So tonight, when you resolve to
lose weight, get out of debt, save money,
stay together for more than the children's sake,
curb your anger or whatever your heart
desires, know this---
There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---
Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice
Happy New Year everyone! As you read this I am on the road to or in Cleveland to spend New Years with my son at the last Pittsburgh Steelers game of the season. A Christmas gift to us from my parents. Be safe out there and embrace the turn of the page tonight.
Over at dVerse Poets Pub, we are having a little party to celebrate and you are invited. Doors open at 3 pm EST.
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Happy New Year's love! You do have a way of finding those great deals -especially on Star Wars related toys. ;) Looking forward to a new year for making special memories with our family and us! Just think of me and Logan being toasty warm and having hot cocoa in the hotel while you and Cole enjoy the game! Know you'll have fun. :)
Happy New Year Brian and family.
1/2 way reading off the same page again today Brian. Nice Job but mine comes with Marvin Gaye! hahahaha
Happy New Year Brian. I wish you and your family the best. Enjoy the game and be safe. Love these lines....
There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---
Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice- great!
epics indeed are carved out of ordinary moments and we need trained and open eyes to see..and write about them..smiles...happy new year to you and your fam and enjoy the game!!!
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---"
You captured it best what I was thinking yesterday. Enjoy the turn of yet another year, full of blessing and love from your family and friends.
Happy New Year ~
Couldn't agree more
Can resolve to do whatever at your shore
Thinking you're so clever
Then time comes and you ignore the endeavor
Just another day that should be taken all the same
Not some made up fake resolution game
Speaking of which enjoy the game too
And Happy New Year to you
Intention and actuality are distant shores. Preach it brother. I long for my resolutions to manifest. One year I did quit smoking cigarettes. I'm still proud of that one. But, I quit on Dec 27th and not the 1st. Oh well. This year... I haven't spoken them yet. Safe travels and happy 2012.
Happy New Year Brian.Love to You & Yours.
Looking forward to another year of "ordinary moments". Wishing you the best of everything in the new year and hoping that your 2012 moments are epic.
What a fine poem for me to remember. It's true: I think you may have changed my ideas of what I will resolve to do this coming year. Or not do. Hope it's a good year for all of us.
Happy New Year Brian. This is a lovely piece from you again. It's been such a pleasure getting to know you through what goes through your mind. Its love, its passion, its sadness and joys. You are a blessing to those lives you touch and sometimes don't even know you do.
Happy new year to you and your family. Enjoy the game. :)
Brian - awesome. Hope you all have the time of your life! Blessings. Hope your 2012 is your best year yet.
This is beautiful with a touch of melancholy, Brian.
I, too, like good deals and keep them for occasions that spring up on us and require a gift... or just for fun.
Enjoy the Stealer's game with your son... and Happy New Year to the Millers!
Brian, I love the thought you expressed about giving things for no special day, just to say I love you!
And so neat that you and son are enroute to a Steelers game. What a priceless Christmas gift.
Happy New Year to you!
What a gift... Steelers are supported here too.
Happy New Year to you and your family. I'm looking forward to another year of your remarkable work.
The very best of New Year's to you, Brian and I am fulfilling my dream. Am almost at the four week mark of my visit to India...loving every minute of my time here...and still have three months to go.
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/12/in-india-thoughts-as-2012-begins.html#links
Nice turn of phrase Brian!!
I am already embracing this New Year!! I am excited for sure!
And a Steelers and Browns game is fabulous, Wish I was there!
Happy New Year
Hugs
SueAnn
Happy New Years my friend! may it treat you and your family most kindly.
Beautifuly said, Brian. And finding those deals surely confirms that you're always thinking of those you love.
Safe travels, enjoy the game and time with your boy.. and Happy New Year to you and yours.
Love this "Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice".
May we always notice the preciousness of each day and each moment.
Happy New Year!
Happy New Years Brian and all the best in The New Year. have a wonderful time with your son...as we turn the page reminded of how many times I have enjoyed reading your blog this year. smiles.
Happy New Year to you and your family!
JJRod'z and JC
very well expressed, reality is what you focus on, what you give meaning to... keep your eyes on the prize.
and happy new year my friend, hope you enjoy the game
This one is worth framing, Brian. Happy New Year to you and your family.
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---"
WOW. Yes, thank you! I needed to hear this. :) Happy New Year, Brian.
True as can be told, every word. Have a safe and exciting time, bri and Happy New Year.
Great thoughts with which to beging the new year. Enjoy the game and the rapidly coming new year!
Brian, I do the same thing, always looking through the clearance sections, find great stuff there too- especially in the bookstores. Definitely true sentiments on following through. Great job and Happy New Years to you and your family.
I love this!
Loved these words
*There is no shortcut on that which is price-less
epics are carved out of ordinary moments and tomorrow *
Happy New Year!
It's been such a pleasure to visit you this year and read all your wonderful poetry!
Thank you, Brian!
Have a wonderful with your son at the game!
Smiles
*time*
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---"
My favorite line in the poem and a reminder not to just let those ordinary minutes slip by.
happy new year
Happy new year...beautiful poem.
Lots of wisdom here.
Happy New Year, Brian!
=)
True!
Happy New Year, Brian!
A huge Happy New Year to you and your family. Wishing you all the best for 2012!!
Happy New Year.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Have a marvelous time at the game, Brian, and Happy New Year!
finding stuff no one else wants is the best, because that's usually what you want, or don't know you want...
Beautiful, Brian : ) Happy New Year to you and your family and thank you so much for all your support and work with dVerse. It's meant a lot to me.
"Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice"
So true! :)
Happy New Year!! :D
A penny saved is still a penny, and we can add the pennies into a dollar quickly.
Enjoy you time with your son at the game.
I am so full of hope that this coming year will be better than the one we are leaving behind.
Have a fabulous time, Brian. Happy New Year! Yes, there is a disconnect between the celebrating of the New Year and actually living through it. You captured it perfectly.
Happy New Year to you and your family.
Wonderfully wise. A tomorrow to you is not just another day, but another terrific poem. This has wonderful wonderful lines. Have a very great new year filled with poetry and good luck. Thanks so much for your kindness. K.
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---
Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice"
Great poem and these lines will be recorded in my journal for the New Year. Just awe-inspiring!
wave to the camera...I'll look for you! :)
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---
Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice"
Hello! Brian...
Here's wishing you, your family,[Especially, your Grandmother] friends, and readers Of Waystation-One a very Happy New Year! in 2012...
Thanks, for sharing...
...By the way, I also hope that you, and your son, Cole, both enjoy the game and that Mrs. Miller and Logan, enjoy the warmth and hot cocoa...too!]
deedee :-D
Brian~ beautiful sentiments here. Loveing the importance you place on loving daily and always looking for what matters in the moment.
Brian, I've been amazed by your dedication to your craft, and the amount of time you spend in caring for the community of writers and artists who draw inspiration from your crew and from each other. You are one-of-a-kind.
May the New Year render to you new wonders to amaze, new friends to embrace, new worlds to discover!
Your writing never ceases to bring a smile to my lips... Thank you for all you've done for the blogging community this year and for all the wonderful words you string together and share with us! I hope tomorrow is not just another day for you, but that all of next year is an extraordinary experience! Gott Nytt Ã…r!
I think this line grabbed me the hardest:
"preparing for always"
Excellent reminders, Brian.
~Shawna
(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)
Happy New Year!
...
My friend, Brian, the philosopher/poet. This is great. Be safe on the road, enjoy the game, and have a happy, creative 2012. My prediction...the guy who wrote the Mayan calendar croaked and that's why it ends in 2012. So, enjoy the moment.
Nice! Finding grace in the ordinary moments is the key. Happy New Year to you and yours.
I never forget that tomorrow may be the only day left. Trying to stay positive and holding hope in the palm of my hand for us all. May 2012 be your best!
I never forget that tomorrow may be the only day left. Trying to stay positive and holding hope in the palm of my hand for us all. May 2012 be your best!
Happy New Year to you and your family! May it bring you good health, prosperity and joy!
What A Comprehensive Conclusion of 2011 and expectation of 2012.
love the insights withdrawn from your personal experience.
Happy New Year.
have fun with your son.
Happy New Year to you Brian! Here's to another year of writing and living life as life should be lived!
Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to you and those you love! Hope the game is fun!
Wishing you and all whom you love Health, Love and Happiness for 2012and beyond!
Nice that you store up gifts of love during the year, Brian! ♥
Happy New Year, Brian. Keep those words of wisdom coming.
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less,
epics are carved out of ordinary moments
and tomorrow---
Tomorrow is just another day
to those that don't notice" - a great, great write here - what a way to welcome us into the new year! happy new year!!
Feel the love Brian. =) Happy New Year dear one.
Happy New Year.
how special to spend time with your beloved child and still manage to do poetry and have fun!!!
Keep Inspiring Us,
Loved your support in 2011,
Best wishes for 2012.
Glad to be back and do this vist.
Keep your briance floating and shining....
xo
Happy New Year to you and your family!
Happy New Year, Brian!
Brian, I try not to let it be known, that yes, to me, tomorrow is just the day after today.
After words are all said, and deeds done, tomorrow, tomorrow, is tomorrow
Yet, there is that ambiance of a holiday, which cannot be denied. So, let dervishes whirl. Midnight has passed--I'm going to bed!
PEACE!
Happy New Year, Brian (to you and your family) Hope you enjoyed the game. I love these lines:
"There is no shortcut on that which is price-less, epics are carved out of ordinary moments"
Sounds like a fabulous way to end the year... Here's wishing you all many special moments in the coming year!
the best of the best of the best of everything to you and yours Brian
Peace...Always...RD
Beautifully done!
Happy New Year! And thanks for all your fun contributions to my 2011 Limerick-Offs!
Not surprisingly, the one I just posted has a New Year's theme. Hope to see you there. :)
Yes, at 16 years old I signed a contract with God that no matter what happened to me I would always smile....Still smiling
to yet another day. another year.
You are awesome my dear, dear writer
A really happy new year to you and yours. This is a fine poem to take with me into the new year. Thanks.
A happy new year to you Brian!
"no one
asks the cost of a gift unless
that is where they find importance"
Love it!
Happy New year to you and yours and thanks for your constant support ...great piece thank you x x
Enjoy the game and have a Happy new Year!
Hey Brian, I have nominated you for the Candle Lighter and Liebster Awards!! :)
http://kweschn.wordpress.com/2011/12/31/liebster-and-candle-lighter-blogs/
You inspire the world with your words!! Wish you the best this year!
Cheers,
:)
lot of content on those bargain (free) aisles of lines of yours ;-)
"a statement and question, she spins / like cinnamon buns" -
plus those near-rhythms are really nuance-y, sparking a nice bounce-response, yet with variation unexpected
and then there's:
"epics are carved out of ordinary / moments---Tomorrow is just another day / to those that don't notice...."
very satisfying work, thanks brian! best wishes to you & family ;-)
Happy New Year to a sweetie!
Happy New Year Brian! The wonderful words you weave are only a small portion of what you do for all of us. Hope you know how much you and your good work are appreciated...and here's to even more of you in 2012
Yeah, what's the big deal: one day follows another. Now if we could figure out how to stop that from happening...
All the best for 2012, Brian and thank you for all you have done for poetry in 2011.
What I hate about the Christmas season is the in-your-face materialism of it all. This poem is the antidote to that. The things that matter really are priceless. Happy New Year Brian.
Intention and actuality are distant shores...what a realization to ring in the new year...Happy New Year Brian!
Happy New Year, and hope that you guys enjoyed the game!! Your poem is apt, especially the thought on not caring how much a gift cost unless that is the vanity of that peep (well said!). Your family is blessed to have giver in their midst. May you be blessed with many writing moments in 2012 ~
Love this Brian - love the lines about epics carved out of ordinary moments especially
what special about you is that you always work hard to portray your friends positively regardless how others think of her/him.
outstanding performance in the year of 2011,
keep it up in 2012.
Always, your kindness and encouragements are valued and won't go unnoticed.
Smiles.
Best Wishes for your blogging adventure in the months/weeks/days to come!
Appreciated your open mind and long time support.
Happy New Year to all of you :)
I have never read such poetry that gives me so many thoughts and emotions... your words are uniquely woven together and I am a big fan!
~L
Wonderful New Year's message. Thank you.
jj
Happy New Year's! I hope you enjoyed the game!
I will take those ordinary moments that are priceless. Best to you in 2012. Great gift for you and your son.
I will take those ordinary moments that are priceless. Best to you in 2012. Great gift for you and your son.
Happy New Year Brian and to your family...Loved our line about how "There is no shortcut on that which is price-less, epics are carved out of ordinary moments..."
Happy New Year, special Brian.
Have a wonderful day with your son, and my NY resolution is an easy one:
I will turn a deaf ear to all Dr Oz tells me to do and make my life one of do's and not don'ts.
Happy New Year!
hope the game went well buddy, great times..
this is one of my favorites, EVER, brian!
your poetry just keeps getting better which is hard cuz it's so damn good already!
i hope 2012 is a year full of smiles for you, my friend.
dani
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