He is a snarl of metal pierced flesh and ink, a hieroglyphic life story, each body part a chapter added, still adding. Atop a bag he sits, back to the columns guarding the door to the big box book store, arms on knees and head bowed to the sun of the Indian Summer.
Through the doors, aisles of ideas and thoughts wait for one to take and eat, collecting dust. Fiction is the real winner and relevant life stories of the rich and famous, names familiar along the best sellers. Every once in a while a new name joins the ranks for longer than a week.
Coffee cups guide people by the hand round and round, periodically talking seats on shelves as they thumb through or sit reading magazines they have no intention of buying, but gleaning enough to talk intelligent in office conversations or at lunch. A pair of hands bridge the gap across a table, eyes sending instant messages encoded/decoded by cardiac code breakers.
Music subtly sets the mood, pace, tone, a soundtrack. Children run down the center to their section, train station, story time. They color pages in bright colored crayon to post on the faux tree wall.
[Rewind] He sits outside the doors, his empty hands, palm raised to the sun. An idea once, now shelved, name etched on his spine waiting for fingers to grace, blow the dust off and decide he's worth reading.
One car passes and then another.
written for Imperfect Prose
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
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Nothing like people watching at the book store. It's a whole different kind of book to read. Even with the last pages left blank.
He went all the way and got published, he will also be read :-)
yes...learning to read what matters...
Blessings~
watching others...it can be an interesting way to pass time, I often try and create a story for them, what their life is,has been,will be....but one never truly knows....
All in good time...and You, Brian Miller, do it every day
i love how you put me right there. . .
Is he worth reading? Always. May this lesson stick with me today. I used to let my eyes flutter past the tatted up ones; now, never. Their stories are rich. I need to read.
Kind of a reflective piece today. From one writer musing on others. Some push so hard to join that crowd, only to end up collecting dust on a shelf as life races past.
Poignant words that left me feeling sad, afraid I might pass that "book" by as well. And others like him.
Thanks, Brian, You gave me some soul-searching to do.
=)
the way you watch people...what you draw from their silent eyes and faces...it continues to amaze me.
You stalker you
Or would that just be a galker or a stalking walker or a stalking walking galker?..haha
Is quite fun to watch as people go about
And make their own book as they shout
Most are worth reading
But the scary ones that might leave you bleeding.ha
"A pair of hands bridge the gap across a table, eyes sending instant messages encoded/decoded by cardiac code breakers."
Love how you captured the essence of an interaction.
I told my brother Stephen about your blog and he's been checking it out. :) He's a poet as well.
This hit close to home for me, very well written.
Brian, I love watching other people. Used to do it so much, had this one job way back in Jersey and I'd take the Bus into NYC then the subway system- lots of fun watching. I still do it but not nearly as much as I like, B & N is a great place to do just that and where I do get my people watching fix on now and then- perfect setting for your tale, and many subtle little observations about books and society in general- great read, thanks
great description of people-watching & a bookstore...
I like this line very much:
Coffee cups guide people by the hand round and round,
and, I like the [Rewind] stanza.
''One car passes and then another.''
……..Life!
wonderful piece.
thanks.
'Coffee cups guide people by the hand round and round, periodically talking seats on shelves as they thumb through or sit reading magazines they have no intention of buying, but gleaning enough to talk intelligent in office conversations or at lunch. A pair of hands bridge the gap across a table, eyes sending instant messages encoded/decoded by cardiac code breakers.'
THAT IS A WONDERFUL PIECE OF WRITING. This has become my all time favourite.
I want to go read his book now!
Interesting characters always make interesting stories :)
Brian,
Perfect picture of the typical phenomena of people watching. A profession that would not bore and a learning experience in fact!
Hank
I always enjoy our trips to the bookstore - there's just a comfort in being there with a family and a warm cup of coffee in hand. Everyone has a story....an important story in this book of life.
Like the old song--'every picture tells a story, don't it...' and every person's a biography on the shelf of life. Man--I am teh profound today--loved this look at the waves of humanity washing against the written word's shores.
Is this you? I'd read you. I'd pull you off the shelf. :)
Learned the most about life by people watching myself. Nice visuals in the story. Thanks for visiting my place today!
I like this one. :)
is he begging?
You can learn a lot by watching others at a Library!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
That guy sounds like me!! lol
[Rewind] He sits outside the doors, his empty hands, palm raised to the sun. An idea once, now shelved, name etched on his spine waiting for fingers to grace, blow the dust off and decide he's worth reading.
One car passes and then another.
The trash maybe but never in the super duper bargain bin.
This blog is a book itself,
each post is a story in it,
and you write your book on daily basis.
reading your book is a dynamic process, which means we read a story at a time, interactive comments make it live...
another fabulous post to chew.
the modern life that lives around and even beneath words.
People watch others but what YOU see is something else. I see by reading YOU.
It's funny how one can be people watching and not realize that one is being watched. Have you ever had that happen? Do you acknowledge that you know they are watching you watch?
So sad that so many book stores are closing. Such a loss for future generations. Save your books while you can, because you never know who you may save.
God bless.
People watching is half the fun at a good book store.
You captured the moment perfectly.
jj
I agree that people watching is fun. And people are different in different place. Book stores tend to show more relaxed people. Airports are altogether different. lol.
An idea once, now shelved, name etched on his spine waiting for fingers to grace, blow the dust off and decide he's worth reading.
perfect. gave me soul-chills.
The truth found midst the mundane. May we have eyes to see.
Your [rewind] portrayal is so haunting, I feel his need and I ache.
Thank you, Janae
What a lovely piece! Does everything just flow so easily from you? I can't imagine you even have time to come up with a few "stinkers".
kinda sad that we're so interested in the biography of famous people and so disinterested in the people around us..someone's son he is and worth to be read carefully..
The smell of books.. And the feel of the pages.. :)
The first paragraph, and the last. Amazing!
Covered in tattoos and piercings, stories of his life, perhaps? Ignored by passers-by only interested in books about the rich and famous. I love the last sentence: 'An idea once, now shelved, name etched on his spine waiting for fingers to grace, blow the dust off and decide he's worth reading.'
Prose like music : full and melodic.
So heart-breaking and beautifully written.
It should have been written for "Perfect Prose". A really delightful piece, a joy to read.
You're a book sitting on the shelf waiting to be read... Love it!
Do you have me feeling melancholy over a book? :)!
"and decide he's worth reading."
i pray i will consider all of the least of these worth reading. for their stories are most powerful. love how you truly see...
Rather a sad, poignant piece, Brian, but colored by your lazer gaze.
Brilliant...you get better and better.
Lady Nyo
You are so good at observing people and then capturing the moments for everyone else to read.
An amazing writer Brian.
This is sort of praise of important stories and a lament about unimportant "popular" biography. Well done.
i just came from the bookstore....a great place for a bux and a little people watching...the sad eyes always leave me wondering too.
"He sits outside the doors, his empty hands, palm raised to the sun. An idea once, now shelved, name etched on his spine waiting for fingers to grace, blow the dust off and decide he's worth reading."
Ugh. That is so, so good. Definitely my favorite part, and I do hope someone finds him worth the time.
People watching is interesting. Everyone has their own quirks when picking something
Another nice one!
whoa, cool.
"doodle pad" is what the guys at the ol' factory called those blokes.
Sometimes I feel that way about my photography...so many images to share and they have to appeal to another person, they have to see the same magic in the image that I did to buy one....and when it does happen, it is amazing.
A great write...someone's son..everyone has a story worth telling...I am amazed sometimes at the stories people share with me...love the bookstore :)
You are like a human camera that captures every minute detail when the rest of us miss the picture for the whole! I'm impressed just "watching you and your words."
So tender, so sensitive. This must be what makes you such a great writer, the way you can select details that many of us disregard. You pay attention to life. That's wonderful Brian, that you notice someone else's son.
Blessings, take care.
"He is a snarl of metal pierced flesh and ink, a hieroglyphic life story, each body part a chapter added, still adding..."
Hi! Brian...
Thanks, for sharing your very descriptive and well-written poetic words.
Anything I can add have already been added by your commenter(readers)...I hope you have a great week-end too!
deedee :-D
I often wonder what the lives of others are like. What is their story?
Beautifully written, Brian. Takes me right into the moment. Love how you related him to a book.
I understand how generous your heart is, but unlike the books on the shelves, this young man may have made some choices of his own that brought him to this moment. Just sayin... :)
So easy not to notice. Glad you did.
You see everyone: the hardened faces in the newspaper telling of a recent crime, and I think, "everyone was someone's toothless grinning baby once."
loved the way u ended it !!
Nice read :)
I like this a lot. I know a couple guys like that... :)
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