Kohl's department store
produces 1/3 less carbon dioxide,
that is how they keep prices down,
at least that is what the voice
on the in store speaker says
perhaps they make the fibers
in the clothes, linens and things
hold their breath, like some
enemy combatant strapped
to a water-board in an attempt
to extract vital intelligence
i know nothing of this,
i am here to buy curtains
once THEY remove the security
device, WE flee & i tear the cellophane
from the face, let them inhale, fresh
air, stretch flat once folded bodies,
rest them on clotheslines so they
can fly on the breeze
their corner label gives the thread
count like a meter, says they are
metaphorically infused & refuse
to ever bend once more to
consumer oppression
i sit by their window, listen,
then tell them about pub fries i met
once, served with a side of thick,
brown, beef gravy, though they were
already covered in chili, cheese,
sour cream & jalapenos.
they read poems they wrote
while hanging around & me
i am just happy they
match the decor.
I know we don't open the doors officially until Tuesday, but so many people are working hard to make this thing happen, Claudia and I thought, what better way to give an extra little boost of energy to get the pub completed than by providing a little break and maybe some entertainment. So, today at 3 pm EST, if you want to stop by d'Verse Poets Pub, maybe you can join in the fun. Just don't mind the dust, we are still working.
It is invitation only, so here is yours.
Saturday, July 16, 2011
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Well I'll be.. your sleeves have held a few secrets, no?.. I am excited.. have cancelled my date, ironed my new clothes and will be at dverse with a smile and a dust-rag(in case you need a helper)...
See, I said changes are good.. This is gonna be FUN!!!
3:00 p.m. - it's a date. Didn't know you were also a decorator!
yep - let's put the brushes down, inhale some fresh air,drink tons of home brew poetry and dance on the tables until late.. can't wait to announce the wonderful team who's working hard behind the scenes to make this possible...and yes - i like the curtains you chose...smiles
ahh yes, those pub fries were the best. Excited for the d'verse doors to open today! You've all put a lot of hard work into it and I know your visitors will not want to leave! :)
excellent - good for you - best of luck with the "pub" opening. Happy Saturday - :)
Cool a new creative outlet for you. Have fun and good luck my friend!
and how freely those curtains danced and flew to the words and poetry you wrote ~
can't wait to see the curtains and decor later :-)
thanks for the invite ~
I love this piece, Brian. ANOTHER outlet for you? You can't possibly be still working and get all the stuff done you already do, can you? I'll head over and take a look. You are amazing!
what a GREAT piece man... beautiful work Brian!! You really ddo write well sir!
What a fun poem and what an imagination you have!
A delightful write! Amazing! I would like to "hang around with you" but to read your write is the next best thing!
I'm impressed.
Friendly curtains, certainly not enemy on water board. Thankfully.
The fact they match the decor is like the poem all in your brainiac head.
I'll never think of curtains the same again :)
Please come over and have a chat with my curtains. They've given all their color to the sun and now don't look as vibrant as when I rescued them from the shelves of Pottery Barn. Oh, why don't they love me?
The cat may have to come take a peak
Although the food the cat does not seek
I'll just curl up my nose
But you know how that goes..haha
Nicely done with the decor as well
Bet your glad they talked back nice and didn't tell you to go to hell..LOL
new curtains hung on the clothes line, fluttering in the breeze. smells delightful.
You set the curtains freeee. Yay, my friend--and this is a wonderful piece. I will be there later with bells on, I was going to bring one of the redneck cowboy construction workers but I dumped him for a lefty poet.
avaritia..."once THEY remove the security device, WE flee & i tear the cellophane from the face, let them inhale, fresh air, stretch flat once folded bodies,rest them on clotheslines so they can fly on the breeze"
Hi! Brian...
"Metaphors" abound in your poem...this Saturday morning I not only read your "words," but I welcomed them...What an interesting read...What an interesting write too!
Thanks, for sharing!
[postscript: Thanks, so much for the invitation..."I accept!]
deedee ;-D
Wonderful! insight into what material would think if it could convey its thoughts.
Took a quick peek at the new d'verse, looks like it'll be fun.
Hope I am invited.
LOLOL Thank you, didn't want to have to clout you one~! hehehe
Yay! What more can I say? Yay! Freaking Yay! (oh...and a fantastic write, Poet....but you knew that already!) See you at 3!
I didn't know you were working on a new site Brian. The things we find on blogs, right? I will be over there, looking later. The fries sound good. Love the perspective from the curtain's POV. You always know how to do that! And, I've heard the same recording over the speakers myself. I thought the prices were lower because the stuff is coming from China. And everything keeps breaking that I buy. Two pairs of shoes, a purse...watch out curtains!!
I. Love. This. It so makes me smile. And really? A poetry pub? I am there!
That was fun! Fries with cheese and a side of gravy is called "Poutine", a French-Canadian dish. Although I personally have never eaten it, my Canadian friends say it's delish!
I tend to give feelings to inanimate objects too. Sometimes when I'm shopping, something sreams at me, to tell me I need to take it home. At least that's my excuse ; )
Going to check out d'Verse...sounds great!
Yup, man! I'm here, and will be THERE at 3 PM EST (does that mean 'estimated'?--grin!)
Now WHERE did I copy that URL?????
I'll bring my violin--and wear a tux...AND my favorite patents!
lol and here I thought they also sold stuff made from cotton, the breathable fabric
i love i tell them about pub fries. it's that kind of playfulness, in addition to the rest of the playfulness that makes this so cool and breezy.
You find poetry everywhere!
thanks for the laughs. ha.
Glad your curtains can breathe now. lol. Hope they are all natural fibers...nothing man made 'cause that would just be so not PC. :)
those fries sound awesome...minus the gravy, I'm thinking.
good luck to you and claudia with the pub!
Best of luck with the grand opening. Hopping over there for a visit now.
Oh wow Brian. I love fries, whether in a pub of Mac's. All the best with the opening dear one. How exciting for you. I did not know curtains could be so exciting as well. ;)
Bet you could make anything come to life in words...
Yikes, that class really did sound like a killer. thanks for the perspective.
This poem completely made my day. Thank you for sharing it.
Nice job Brian. Really some excellent writing here. Will stop by seeing it happens to be 3 right now, look forward to seeing the site
I will never look at my curtains the same way.
I'm glad yours match.
Oh, I love new curtains...blowing freshly in the breeze ;) Just love new beginnings me...*raises a toast* Hope Mr Linky's working.. ;)
i tear the cellophane
from the face, let them inhale, fresh
air, stretch flat once folded bodies,
rest them on clotheslines so they
can fly on the breeze
their corner label gives the thread
count like a meter, says they are
metaphorically infused & refuse
to ever bend once more to
consumer oppression
Love this, thanks!
Quite a crowd at your table Brian and I thought I'd be early! Clothes holding down their breath and reducing the carbon inprint. I think we'll use old glass and fresh linens. The less to go to landfills. This is no plastic burgerjoint. This is THE place to meet. Thanks for all the hard work to fill the void we all were feeling.
YES! I'm there, dude! Great opener. Great to be onboard, brother. I realised that you and I have been reading each others poetry without prompting for well over a year, before OSP began and everyone was doing Thursday Rallies. Wow... well if you can still put up with me after all that time.. hehe
Brian-- I am so excited about your new poetic adventure. The new décor is a real delight! Cheers! C.
As a writer and a thinker, I enjoy the directions that what people read lead their minds to go in.
Crazy, but this got me thinking about how casinos pump in oxygenated air to keep people awake and ... well, gambling.
I really liked your poem :-)
Brian, you are a maniac! I have heard that recording while shopping in Kohl's and I can tell you truthfully - never once did it prompt such thoughtful words in me. Of course, I didn't have those "pub fries" to inspire me.
I don't believe I've ever read a more eloquent description of someone's interactions with inanimate objects, specifically curtains. Fabulous. Even though I haven't talked to curtains (or won't publicly admit it), I found myself nodding as I read.
Very fun, and I love that they shared their window with you and listened intently :)I am super excited about this new community. Hoping to learn a lot.
I stopped by to express my most heart-felt thanks to you, Brian, for all that you have done at OSP, and all that you have meant to emerging writers. I will not forget the time I have spent there, nor your continued dedication to the world of online poetry.
Many many thanks
light and easy, hope the fries are not greasy - blame mr hatt. thank you brian for bringing the joy and the love for words.
I wish I could stop by, Brian.
Great piece (as always!!) really enjoyed, love the idea of them writing your poems!
Love the poem - now I'm off to check out the new site :)
Great poem to welcome in the new Brian. So pleased to be here for the birth, get the drinks in and we'll wet the baby's head. If you guys don't so that in the U.S. that's gonna make no sense whatsoever haha
Site's off to a lovely start, Bri! Not even opening day yet, and yet so many talented folks have turned out, flooding the walls with their beautiful works. It's a community service, what you lot are doing. Tip my hat to you, sir.
Mmmm....I like pub food. I'll have one of everything on the menu.
Sorry for being so late to your "table," Brian. Family obligation. I enjoyed this piece very much. It's a fun ride from Kohl's to your house to the pub. Thanks for the piece and all you're doing.
Glad the curtains can breathe now and match!
Now I want some fries...
I can hear all that hammering! :) Thanks for all the hard work - I appreciate it.
You amaze me. Yes.
A bit late, but thought I would drop by on my way home from work. The place looks fabulous... and those curtains you selected are pure poefection. Think I'll make a few rounds on my way out.
sounds interesting! :-) and i appreciate all the hard work.
Such fun!
Loved it, Brain.
How do you manage all you do?
I'm very impressed!
Good luck to you and all the others on the new venture at d'verse!
Margie :)
Liking this Brian, I will be popping by, I knew nothing of this site. you have been busy. take care.
gosh how amazing you make it all sound, I dig the breeze, I'm not a joiner though...
I wishI were
Hi Brian, Thanks for the invite. Your opening poem sets a high bar for the customers of dVersePoetry. Looking forward to some great sessions of vino & verse.
really sorry i missed it!
They cut down on carbon dixoide by not allowing customers to exhale until they leave the store.
No, seriously (I think), you captured that Kohl's experience, any shopping experience.
Wow, I just love your description of living, breathing curtains, and your ensuing conversation with them. Awesome write!
The positive energy swirling around dVerse is impossible to resist. Cheers Brian. You're a good man to have liberated those curtains.
What a fun poem, Brian. I'm so excited about this venture and happy to be a part of it. Cheers to you and all the imbibers of good verse and brew!
always thankful for the little things like views of curtains flowing in the breeze... those fries sounded really enticing too! :)
This is great - a whimsical social commentary.
beautiful use of metaphors, happy we all are for the new beginning and common interests we pursue.
I'll be there with my hammer and frayed jeans. Cheers!
I like this. Those curtains were in need of a deep breath no doubt.
ooooooooooooh fries and gravy
sorry, you got me distracted there
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