Concrete, chipped and pitted, worn in grooved paths where feet fall, flows between brick, periodically broken by the stems of metal flowers, lamp posts now sleeping on the edge of dawn. Without the pools they provide, the world is in black and white, waiting for the sun to come color. They call this the jungle.
It is Wednesday, you can tell by the smell. Beneath the brake dust and exhaust lies exotic spices that come from the burst embryos of trash bags. Second story dwellers, conserving energy, drop them like hydrogen bombs out window, silently so as not to let you know it is coming before the whistling grabs your attention, turning your head just in time for the splash eruption.
Men will come collect what makes it into the dumpster, sometimes even scooping the spills in flat headed shovels, tossing it in to crush, cart off to some place we don't see, monuments to our waste. Our past. Where we have been as we rush head on, grasping hands first into the future, leaving them to figure what to do with it when we get there.
This early the streets are silent except the scrape, bang of the trash man, grinding gears, grind to a halt, grinding. Cars weave around his slow progress, stirring wind in their wake. Hiss, hiss, the buses brake and clang as they clip sewer caps. And my foot steps rap.
By a corner alley cut through between buildings one sack, split, spilt out, a baby doll lays half hanging head and arm staring back with one button eye. Rice crawls across her from some days left overs, but she smiles in stitching. A toy too young, too old, too yesterday to some kid discarded.
Checking my watch, I jay walk the street and find a seat on the bus stop bench, snatching a passing piece of newspaper blowing down the sidewalk to catch up on the news from three days ago. Grind, hiss, bang. Grind, hiss, bang, bang. The dumpster comes to a stop across the street, disembarking her waste management warriors in blue coveralls to scoop and schlep the mess.
One man, bald, mops his head with a red kerchief and blows his nose, then bends to one knees drawing my eyes. Curious, I watch him fish the refuse then tenderly lift the body in his hands. He dusts her off, gentle, the whites of his teeth cracking wide catch the first glint of sun. Unzipping, he tucks the baby doll inside where it will be warm and safe until he gets home.
The bus abruptly blocks my view, its doors peeling open inviting me in and I take a new seat and watch through the window as they load the bags, empty the cans and we pull away. Who will get his treasure? Will they smile, like he, in gratitude at something new, to them, not caring where its been?
Crinkling, I fold the paper back in a neat rectangle and scan the stock market listings as if they mattered, more than passing the time until my stop.
for Theme Thursday and 10DOM
Wednesday, March 16, 2011
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I love this scene - especially of the doll finding a new home. (Toy Story 3 kills me.) Great job - I was right there seeing, smelling and hearing.
one man's trash...
I love the imagery. Happy to know the doll has found a new home.
You sure know how to put a person right there in the scene! I love that the doll finds a new home. As they say, "One man's trash, another mans treasure".
It's trash day here too....although nobody is going to find any treasures in our trash today. :)
Such a rich selection today highlighting how all in life is perception. Beautiful.
Could almost hear the trash bags whistling by my head, just reading your vivid account.
"...but she smiles in stitching." What a telling detail,foreshadowing her future. Well done!
I just felt like I was there........beautiful imagery.
Hi! Brian...
I hear these sounds..."scrape, bang of the trash man, grinding gears, grind to a halt, grinding..." every Wednesday morning too!
I sometimes wonder where all that trash is going to eventually, end-up too!
Recycling is the key!
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
This one was vivid in my mind. Love the found treasure and the loving thought that picked it up.
life in the city...amazing,vibrant and alive...the doll, very creative way to look at the throw aways in society...brilliant my friend
This touches something really deep in my heart. I understand the empathy in it. Those minutes where the person you are watching becomes everything to you in your thoughts...
Sometimes a scene or a person strikes you as so fragile...so heartbreaking and poignant.
But I also know too well, the way we distance ourselves from it. Maybe we can't handle such feeling for very long. It hurts the heart.
Have a great day. :)
You have such a brilliant way with words!
I was there, right there, hearing the sounds, smelling the scents. Long before the man knelt, I longed for someone to rescue that doll.
Wonderful Brian.
Ah, trash day and all that comes with it if you allow yourself to think beyond the bags. What are the implications of what we throw away, what we pick up, what we see if we look beyond the surface. Where does it all go, where do the collectors go when they are done, what happens to our earth and on and on. So much to think about in such a short little poem. You are brilliant in touching other's lives in many different ways.
You can write purpose and meaning to just about any everyday occurrences. That doll is going to be loved.
I could smell the garbage.
(It reminded me of when I worked in downtown Chicago.)
=)
The picture of the man kneeling in the street to tenderly rescue that doll from garbage...wow...I could think on that for a while.
This is wonderfully vivid and teases all of the senses. You really brought this scene alive!
aww...somebody got a new dolly to love!
Wow, it sure is true the people we see every day. Little crossings between humans.
Very Fisher King-ish this doll story to me.
:)
So much of the world goes unnoticed. Who is picking through my past and finding a treasure to reuse?
You make me think, as always.
So many treasures to be found, if we truly open our eyes. On my way home from my husband's apartment I dug a hug candlopra(sp) lamp out of the garbage. I took it home stripped and repainted and then had a lady make this gorgeous victorian shade for it. It is beautiful to all who see it.....
Lamposts now sleeping on the edge of dawn. Love it!!!
Sacred time of day that is Brian!
It always makes me a little sad, seeing children's toys and clothing discarded in the trash. I wonder if there was excitement and joy when the items were new? I wonder if they were given and received in love. I think there are a lot of stories out there in the trash piles. You found one.
Aww, hate to see discarded dolls, they look as lonely as an odd sock. Two birds, one stone eh?
Who knew a bus ride, and a trashman could make me lean on my elbows to read a story.
This is good. Do I smell a faint hint of a dumpster? Yep. You managed to take us all the way there.
aw, so sweet, your words make this outstanding.....a baby doll with smiles in her stitching... i am hoping there's a little girl waiting for her dad to bring it home to her....
Wow. So glad rice is not on tonight's menu (that image of it "crawling" across the doll's face, so powerfully drawn)...all the sights, the smells, and now the hope. For the doll, perhaps for all of us.
Surprised but glad you went the other way with this...
Loved all the specific details here. You brought the scene to life once again.
There are treasures to be found in the trash. I'm telling ya!
it is all a matter of one's perspective, i am told...happy hump day
Aw, what a tender rescue of the discarded doll.
There is always so much for the heart and soul to digest in the city...
You make art of life well, Brian
xxx
an auditory delight with an ending that both warms and chastens me. well done yet again, brian.
thanks a lot for making me smell garbage (you good writer, you). sadly, though, this story would never play out in my world. our garbage men make more than we do -- our trash is definitely not their treasure.
A nice slice of daily life in the urban jungle. Love the brief glimpse into the one man's life. Leaves me wanting to know more about him.
It was so pleasant to read this. Though about garbage, there is a gleam of joy within it. I hope we all find that gleam, even for a moment, especially when trash surrounds us.
I like the way you slowed down to tell this simple story of daily life. It's nice to just sit and observe our world sometimes. Too often we are rushing through life and don't really enjoy the here and now. There are many treasures/blessings to be found along our journey...if.we.just.slow.down.
I like that your trashman found a treasure for someone special. Makes me think of Frankie.
How do you do this??? You take something so ordinary that every one of us sees daily and turn it into poetry. Amazing.
The jungle...so true. I work in it every day.
PS. Yo, thanks Dawg for your comment! :-)
Felt just like I was walking with you, Brian...the man scooping the baby doll - priceless.
What an amazing picture you paint with words.
So much to love here, Brian. I can smell the garbage...all the way over here. And I love your man with red kerchief and wide smile.
The doll makes me sad. Poor one eyed thing!
I love these lines:
Our past. Where we have been as we rush head on, grasping hands first into the future, leaving them to figure what to do with it when we get there.
Another walk in your daily life...so complete I'm sure I boarded the bus right along with you.
I felt like I was right there. Very well done Brian.
hmmm......so...like we have anything good to report in gotham city my dearrr robin ?
grins....sowwy...jus pulling your leg...:))
this was really a touching write...i remember there was this time i used to take the bus to my college everyday and pass a railway colony on the way..small tiny....
like a filing cabinet of human lives...but what always caught my eye were the plants all those people used to have hanging in old tins n bottles n jars on their balconies...that splash of joy n hope....hmm ?
its a pleasure to read you brian..mean that...smiles
I could smell the trash
and I hope the doll has a good new home
As always, you are a keen observer of humanity and you can convey it so eloquently with your words.
So much love lies in the most unusual places.
Have a great St. Patrick's day dear Brian,
xoxo
This is so vivid. I was there. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
Liked the way you described the scene, yes I too felt I was there. But.... 'Second story dwellers, conserving energy, drop them like hydrogen bombs out window' .... WHAT! Does that really happen where you are?
Once again you take something so common and monotonous and make it into a compelling scene. "One man's trash..."
Such a tender scene - the old man giving the doll shelter.
That is simply marvellous. Our rubbish collected on Wednesday too - but I didn't notice any of that. Thanks for making me slow down and relise that I probably missed something wonderful.
Love it, Brian. This is a great moment you captures. A writer's eye is never closed!
Happy St. Pat's back atcha! :)
Cheers!
i relish this space: lamp posts now sleeping on the edge of dawn. Without the pools they provide, the world is in black and white
and i celebrate this one: He dusts her off, gentle, the whites of his teeth cracking wide catch the first glint of sun.
in both i find The Son :)
thank you for sharing, as always, fantastic write :]
-t-
so many textures here, vivid imagery and storytelling...life among death. You had me at "It is Wednesday. You can tell by the smell."
Your story rings true about the grit, dust, and struggle for many.
If those first couple of paragraphs had been the first couple of paragraphs of a new book I was reading I would have been well and truly hooked.
There are so many broken ones 'too young, too old, too yesterday'..I hope there are more angels like the man out there who picked er up and gave her a warm, safe place near his heart...
I love how you paid such close attention to the garbage pick up, and found something meaningful and sweet among the mess. Beautiful.
You are a brilliant writer, Brian. I think this piece is one of the best of yours I've read. And I've read a lot of them since I joined your band of admirers.
The lamp post part was my favorite as well, so many good descriptions of what your Wednesday looks like today.
I adore this...for some reason I have always had sympathy for the discarded. Living and non-living. One would think I would be a hoarder as I give non-animate things feelings. To think the doll COULD have ended up in the dump, yet, thinking of the JOY she will bring to some little girl...you really caught a feeling there.
Well done.
brian, this is great. so great. on so many levels.
"cart off to some place we don't see, monuments to our waste."
can't see it, it must not exist.
denial!
Wow Brian, you put us there on that bench. Happy for the doll to have a new home and for the child that it will make smile.
Tara,
I don't know if you and I are thinking of the same, but me too!!
-L
thank you brian for taking us to the heart of a sacred-ordinary moment.
Oh the waste, the waste we produce, it's tragic! What a lovely little snippet of someone who values it, and what a great description of our trash as being our past. That's actually haunting. In my job, we often talk about how to get people in communities where we work to clean up their own trash. I wonder if they ever thought of it this way, if that would help them make wiser decisions?
wow. the way the trash bags burst like embryos, the way your footsteps rap... you pulled me in, i had no choice, forced to face the dismembered doll... well done, brian. (as always)
ps. how do you make poetry out of trash??!
yes you do - you make poetry out of garbage..
A Parade Of Life.The Beauty Of Concrete.
I Love This Brian.Man! Your Writing Is On Fire At The Moment.
You've created such a rich, tangible scene. Outstanding.
You built a place with hammer nails and pencil...and i was there...your imagery is amazing Brian! :-)
Your word pictures are a wonder.
your writing is always so interesting, always draws me in. this was one of my father's favorite sayings...
thank-you always for visiting, and your treasured comments.
As much as I love your writing these are the things I like best.
What will Thursday bring? or maybe what DID Thursday bring?
Wonderful descriptions, Brian. I loved the part about the baby doll - it is an ill wind indeed...
I am glad that the doll will have a new home. We discard so much and in doing so discard ourselves.
This is so good -- what and how much we discard says so much about us as a nation.
Wonderful description of your street scene, Brian. I loved that he tenderly brushed off this doll and kept her....
You brought me right to that street corner, watching the action. A tender moment caught, then gone.
Your descriptions are vivid, and I felt I was there with you. Fabulous story-telling, friend...
"...monuments to our waste. Our past."
Great stuff :)
wow! your writing is always brilliant.
The images of this piece, Brian, are just astounding and in some ways so unrelenting that I was driven along from one to the other, until that final fantastic image of the treasure hunter and his smile. Really like the prose form, which while shaped as fiction resounds as poetry. And finally, there just couldn't be a sweeter account of trash!
Ok... the man creeped me out a bit. What is he going to do with that doll?... will we ever know?...
I could feel the beat of the street though-very rap like.
Great detail, Brian. I could see and smell Wednesday. In my mind's eye, you, I and the doll were in Max Headroomland.
Hmm... now I'm wondering when my trash day is.
Er oh...
Hi Brian, great imagery.
Excellent Brian! Loved the phrase, "lamp posts now sleeping on the edge of dawn." Loved that someone rescued the doll!
I got so wrapped up in your story, I forgot to say:
Congrats on POTW!
Congrats on POTW.
Wow, powerful piece, gruff with the noises of the trash truck grinding by... leading to the tenderness shown to a simple treasure to be resurrected for some young unknown heart. Very observant piece.
You created a perfect picture, Brian. We really don't see everything around us unless we open our minds as well as our eyes. You are a genius at that.
Beautifully and tenderly written Brian. Brought a tear to my eye and I thought of the smile that little doll will bring when he cleans her up and fixes her.
Congrats on your POTW
Hugs
SueAnn
What a poetic rendition of the wonderfully mundane we so often take for granted. It was just beautiful. Thank you.
I enjoyed your post. I liked your images and the sounds that you described. It went along with the prompt, I thought.
I hope for that doll--that it will find a good home. (I agree about Toy Story 3).
Well done!
Comment # 101 to say congrats on your POTW from Hilary.
Cheers, jj
Reminds me of Dr. Eckleburg and the valley of ashes. Gatsby.
You write so well, just like FSF!
Did my comment go through? i like this one very much, reminds me of FSF, and his Dr. Ecklberg watching over the valley of ashes. You also remind me of FSF!
Watching the world outside the bus is so much more educational and enlightening then the stock market. Nice take on the prompt enjoyed it.
Nice setting of scene. Like I've said before, you do these slice of life pieces so well. I've missed reading you (and my other must-reads). This reminded me again why you're on that short list.
So prolific, I love your description of rubbish bags as erupted embryos's. I was touched by the scene with the doll too,such tenderness...
Ah, a story on it's way to being told. -J
Wow. You have a lot of comments.
For some reason, the baby doll with the rice was imagined in my head as an abandoned baby with maggots.
Either way, interesting story and one of my favorites by you.
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