where i sit
ocean licks sky
tongue rough
with waves
it blushes
orange & pink
giggles on the
salty breeze
&
i want to
kiss you
places that
make your
soul quiver
What can you say in 160 characters? Go tell Monkey Man. And a simple water color for my friends at Sunday Sketches.
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119 comments:
Mercy. Just mercy!
Simply beautiful. . the water color and the writing!
Wow this is beyond awesome. Perfect. And you made the painting Mr Brian Miller? Wow.
very beautiful!
What have you not said here that makes teh reader's hearts quiver. And the painting . . . what can I say?
A delight to stop by and wonder what to comment :)
Joy always,
Susan
'giggles on the salty breeze'... wonderful. This is pure heaven, Brian. And the painting is so descriptive of the words you wrote.
Beautiful and sensuous!
Oooo!
"Make my soul quiver" gave me goose bumps!! Ha!
Hugs
SueAnn
Just gorgeous, this. Love it, picture and words.
-C
Incredibly sensual.
Ooooh you are soo romatic Brian :)
Lovely watercolour too. Like how you captured the sea and the sky.
"tongue rough
with waves"
Awesome!!
wire mesh
So lovely Brian
oh my - this is both - playful with the giggles on the breeze and beyond sensual with the rough tongues..makes my soul quiver just by reading..
Mercy Me Mr Brian!!
Like the water colours seep into the parchment your words seep under my skin & goose pimples are born. Shiver!!!!
Sensual 160!
just fantastic brian. wow. what a romance!
have a beautiful sunday and week ahead.
trisha
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you touch the very soul with your apostrophe...Thumbs up sir!
Lovely words and painting :o)
Love the painting and words!
I always blush when I read your love letters to your wife. We uptight New Englanders are like that.
I love your use of pathetic fallacy for the actions of the ocean and sky.
Ooooh..nice! Even first thing in the morning! ;)
I had to read this to hubby. Lots of fun and excitement in this poem.
Blushing. Your wife must love these, they're so romantic and um, erotic. As you say, smiles.
What a wonderfully romantic post, the picture and words fit together so beautifully.
Is it me, or did it just get really warm in here? Great post! I think I'll go wake John up!
longing,like the distant shore is always reachable....good one dude,as always:)
Wow!This is so beautiful!Well done.
ooo....love the colors you paint with your brush and especially love the colors in your words.
well done!
You continue to amaze!
Deliciously sensual in images and words...
;)
Have a lovely Sunday dear Brian,
xoxo
did you paint this? lovely combination with the sexy poem.
Sometimes you are the romantic! Thanks Brian!
Whew - it is suddenly very hot in here...
I think this is one of my favorite poems so far. (I like the subtlety of the painting to accompany your very visual words)
Giggles,
I'm a sucker for giggles.
Love the colour!
"Giggles on a salty breeze..." Now that's what I need!
Can I sit there, too? I promise to look at the ocean and not watch you with that "other chick". LOL. Have a super Sunday, Brian!
Soooo lovely...
love the simplicity of this painting, and it is the perfect complement for your lovely poem!
to answer your question about the bookmarks, I am going to make each of the kids a bookmark that is personalized with things they love, like starwars, barbies, and art after I finish these colorful ones. WE read like crazy so you can never have too many bookmarks can you?
Glad to have you back at SS!
Smiles
So beautiful Brian. After taking a little time off, you seem recharged with passion. That's wonderful. I love the painting. It's so serene, then your words put it on fire.
Oh my...I feel as if I just walked in on a very private moment...I'll just back out and leave you two alone.
*sigh*
o la laa...beautiful...
I hope that this isn't written to me? lmao!
Wow!! Such wonderful words for a beautiful sunset!
Great 160, B. Thanks for playing.
love your simple watercolour and your poem.
Oh! I love this!
I love the imagery in this one! Delightful!
sorry for being absent from your blog! I've been distracted in many many ways...thanks a lot for this, so beautiful and frisky ... you just made my Sunday!
holy crap! Ocean "rides," car rides - they're all good..smiles...very creative 160.
Soul quivvering eh? Now that's a romantic notion... Very nice!
oh my my
and such a lovely painting too~
Oh My I think I am quivering! Wow I love that one. And the colorful painting!
Beautiful words and lovely painting.
Swoon!
Lovely painting and delicious words.
Ah, you are so sweetly romantic. She's a lucky one.
Beautiful colours and provocative words..stunning!
They say there is power in a sunset. Enough power to unbridle our hearts and minds ...
Beautiful sunset painting, with words that go deep into the horizon making it feel more alive within one's soul that ever imagined. :)
I know that feeling. Nice artwork Brian.
oh senses and color of nature fit together so well here
Love the painting and your words are delicious....:-)Hugs
Brian, I've always said the ocean is a tease ;)!
PS. I see Otin admits this was written for him :)!! HAHA!
otin, you really were not supposed to tell any one...lol.
"giggles on the salty breeze" is my favorite line!
A beautiful marriage of words and paint. The artist poet...lovely!
very pretty painting, and I enjoyed your poem!
Beautiful, beautiful!
Simple, direct yet eloquent. Brilliant! Made my soul quiver :)
How lovely. Be nice to be kissed in those places!
The painting and the words are beautiful... I may have to steal that last line for a romantic encounter!
Lovely Brian. Blessings.
As Pastor Sharon said, Have mercy!
love the water color Bri
yes we were both inspired by the sea. Very romantic
Welcome back - moonie
wow...simply...wow
Very cool blog.....so creative
Check out my shoe designing blogspot too? All my designs happen to be hand-drawn also - Keep up the great work and take care....
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I'm speechless!
Nice, nice, nice. Be still my heart!
jj
waves
Yum! You make my heart go giddy-up!
Beautiful Brian, and the water color too....very subtle and so romantic...bkm
WOW
Very nice thoughts inspired by lovely art.
If greeting cards were awesome they'd contain verses like that.
Whooooooooooooooooa! hehe
And i think this may be the most comments I've ever seen on a post ever! Haha
I'm going to integrate some of these lines into my pick-up scheme.
Seriously though: good writing...again.
you paint a beautiful picture Brian. Both with words and image. nice 160.
holy cow!
you are one popular guy!!!
I just want to say that I love your water color...it is beautiful and dreamy.
I wish I could write...though this piece you have here seems very sensual but I enjoyed it a LOT!
I love how much you love your wife...I am blessed to witness it...your water colors and your words hug my heart tonight. Thank you Brian.
Love it - "where I sit ocean licks sky"
oh wow Brian!!! love the watercolour....and the poem...wild!!!!
Have a wonderful week!!!
Well you did a great job with that constraint, I think you are kind of harsh on yourself. Enjoy what you do and relax, otherwise everything becomes a little painfull in life.
wow.... i'm speechless.
Hi! Brian...
Once again...your poetic words compliment your beautiful watercolour painting.
Personally, I really like to watch sunset(s)& blue skies and you, have captured both beautifully..."where i sit
ocean licks sky."
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
Fabulous Brian.
Perfect combination of words and image.
Dear Brian,
This jumps at me, tugs at my innermost romantic self and I say out loud -
This is poetry. This is where words are better, brighter and more beautiful than life.
Lovely words, very romantic!
CJ xx
comment number 100.
"Giggles on a salty breeze" indeed!
just right.
When I saw the picture, without reading the poem, I though, oh it looks like the ocean is licking the sky. Great painting AND poem.
"giggles on the salty breezes..." love it!
Love it, just love it.
Very racy....... Love it!!!!!!!
Ooooooooooooooo, "R" rated without even being "R" rated!
Holy Cow! Bob will be reading this one when he gets home tonight. Oh yes he will.
Hoo-weee!
Saucy, to say the least.
;)
and I want to go diving with such a sight
Simply gorgeous. Poem and painting.
"Ocean licks sky"--mmmmm...
OK.....WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wooh, that's HOT stuff!
(love the painting too)
whheeewww..this was some coooool HOT stuff! (giggles)
Loved the imagery... very serene (and
simultaneously tumultuous!)
And the art work is really sweet!
Awesome, Brian, both the poem and the watercolor.
Oooh.. a real sigh-evoker.
and the romantic Brian is back :-) lol just teasing you! it's beautiful!! happy day to you and yours!
Watercolor and love poems?
Now I kinda feel sorry for your sweet wife, what a life you put her through...
I kid, I kid...
What lovely images - and the last verse... well... how good can you get?
ah. giggles on the breeze. :)
thank goodness for blogging that led me to read your words. me and a lot of other grateful peeps.
woow...
Amazing finish...
the colors are perfect...
"ocean licks sky"....very nice work :)
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