perhaps this is it,
someone's last hope
dumped overboard
washed upon shore
waiting to be found,
still learning to fly,
only so high inside,
dreaming beyond
these invisible walls, i.
quick, find a rock, break
the glass, release me
once more to dance
among the clouds until
a gentle breeze carries
me across horizon's line
artwork by tera @ olive hue designs, who commented last week that she would like to do a pic based on one of my poems...i just beat her to it by selecting one of her pictures. do drop over and pay her a visit.
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How nice when artists collaborate.
It does scream for release. I will have to pay her a visit.
The dirigible is far from incorrigible.
Wow, that picture is so intriguing! The poem fits so nicely. Two very talented people!
Very nice match up!
Yes! Break the glass to free those dreams. Nice images here.
Beautiful. I love the way you gave a voice to the little blimp.
Well done.
If I'm not mistaken, we have two pieces of her artwork in my home. ;)
As one who is stepping through bits of shards, taking wing herself, I can tell you I was able to internalize this bit of prose. Wonderful, Brian.
Very nice collaboration. Off to visit her blog now - thanks for sharing.
i really like across horizon's line. that is sweet.
a beautiful combo, your words with the art...perfect.
cool
Beautiful. "release me once more to dance..." Like the artwork, too.
Open it quick, the suspense is killing me.
Inventive and involving
Aloha from Hawaii
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set sail
free me to dance once more....amazing write!
Yes,quickfind that rock- release
For there's no time..
from an ever drawing near..
horizon line
I loved the art/poem combination...both made the other sing.
Excellent poem and art collaboration. Love this!
Cool!
Now, that's collaboration!
I am so honored. Your poem is lovely. Thank you so much! As soon as I'm done with your picture, I'll email you a file. :)
I like this....nice
Nice. I am off to pay her a visit!
I love the melding of minds to create a work of art! :)
Release me to dance!!! I feel this way often. Usually when sitting at work.
What a beautiful collaboration between two talented artist; exquisite in words and image.;))
Have lovely day dear Brian,
xoxo
wow..what a beautiful poem..
I got carried away by the breeze in your poem :)
Beautiful mixture.
Love the image and the words!!
Hugs
SueAnn
If it's not addressed to me shouldn't I chuck it back into the sea?
A lovely marriage of two pieces of art! Wonderful.
Joy always,
Susan
Tear in my heart, gosh I love this Brian
Very nice.
Awesome collaboration!
Keep dancing Brian
This is beautiful..breaking through our shell, time after time..and so it goes...Happy, Merry!!
Both are very pretty!
Wow, this was a nice entry into the waystationone archives. I really resonated with this.
this is perfect! the flow of the image and your words. a thinker!
i will pay her a visit. thank you for showing her work
great piece
Love this Brian... am off to meet the creator of the lovely painting.
That's really nice!:)
Very cool!
I like the metaphor of that. And do you ever wonder what you'd do if you found a note in a bottle asking for help?
Both nicely done! Bravo!
I love to see your heartfelt words illustrated. I've always wanted to find one of those, too....xxoo
Lovely. Both the picture and the words complement each other perfectly. So nice how you always explore different ways to express yourself.
How fun to take a fellow artist's work and write something amazing to go with it. Nice work, both of you.
Dance away, my friend!
Be careful...when you break the glass you shatter that which has so far cradled your dream safely to the shore.
Amazing imagery in your piece. Perfect marriage to the intriguing art. Great collaboration! Off to check Tera's blog.
beautiful artwork and a beautiful poem...still learning to fly..yes
Love the picture and the poem. Both are portraits of my current life. Oh how I long to find that rock...
Cheers!
Jen
Both forms of art capture hope and sorrow – desire and constraint. It is wonderful when we can put words to pictures and have them work so wonderfully together.
Great picture complemented by an equally good poem. Freedom is good....
I read this a few times, the image you chose is perfect, as many have commented. Really nice and poignant
beautiful.
Love the poem and the picture. Thanks for selecting the picture and matching them with the perfect words.
I hope that someone gets my...
I hope that someone gets my...
message in a bottle.
Off to visit olive hue now!
xo
It could be a love letter or an SOS or...
Lovely Bri - hopeful
Moonie :)
Okay, so you've got rocks and glass on the brain today. lol This is nice.
What a lovely combo.
you portrayed message in a bottle so beautifully brian.
wow.
two poems back to back talking about the effects of rocks tossed for betterment.
trisha
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so beautiful and how nice when the artists come to work together :-) happy day Brian!
Nice to have a note in a bottle and find it. I haven't done that. I released several when I was a kid.
lovely...being set free from that bottle....bkm
Hi! Brian...
Nice words...that compliment your image...very well!
Thank-you, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
What fun- thanks! Merry Christmas.
Ha. that is fun to do that for her too. Nice!
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