hand in your back pocket
my other stirs the heavens,
as we
traipse among the stars
i in bare feet
so as not to miss
a single sensation
of our time together.
What can you say in 160 characters? Go tell Monkey Man. and an unfinished colored pencil sketch to accompany for Sunday Sketches.
my other stirs the heavens,
as we
traipse among the stars
i in bare feet
so as not to miss
a single sensation
of our time together.
What can you say in 160 characters? Go tell Monkey Man. and an unfinished colored pencil sketch to accompany for Sunday Sketches.
Had a great time tonight with Richmond Slam Poetry. Will be back in town tomorrow afternoon and play catch up. Hope everyone has a great Sunday.
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Lovely, as your words always are. I love the drawing too. Tender.
I love the artwork, Brian. And the words have me envisioning a walk among the stars on a warm summer night...and where would be a finer place to walk?
So sweet. I love the imagery set up in the first two lines. :)
Great art work! Great writing! I love to read what you write, always.
Tender and inspiring!
Short but super sweet ;)
Just beautiful Brian, did you do the artwork too.your words were like heaven.
The drawing is beuatiful, you are so multi-talented.;)
Have a great Sunday Brian,
xoxo
Wonderful Brian.
Please stop my mind wandering....lol.
Such a wonderful image your poem evokes. Stirring the stars...love it!
Hugs
SueAnn
It's where that other hand is stirring that has me curious {;-P}
Nice writing as it has always been, Brian. Good sketch, reminds me of Brokeback Mountain
Love the sketch Brian & your words are always stirring!
brokeback mountain...hmmm...
Like the image, kind and sweet.
The whole idea of stirring the heavens is a joy. To enjoy walking with someone so much that you don't want to miss a single thing is beautiful.
Is this your sketch? Nice sentiment.
Beautiful sketch, Brian. And your words just sing. I sure do miss summer.
I love the sketch, the words, everything, wow
Love it! Too cute and toucingg! I remember that feeling.
Nice movement in this, and good emotion.
Thanks so much for sharing your art and your words. Lovely work.
Nutty
(crawling into bed)
The sketch is lovely. Need I say about the words. Walking with a loved one is BLISS.
Joy always,
Susan
Nice write. Thanks. I'm not sure I like someone's hand in my back pocket? Oh well, to each his own.
Love it. I especially love the art and words together building a vision! A wonderful walk!
That is really beautiful!Have a nice day :)
loverly little ditty...barefoot
brian, I hope your wife saves all of the romantic notes you must leave for her! Your words here are amazing, and I love the drawing,too - Sweet romance, what could be better! xxoo
Wow! I would love my hand to be in someone else's pocket right now :D
Lovely words and sketch Brian, with a romantic tone!!
Happy Sunday
Katerina
very sweet :)
Sweet, is there nothing better than bare feet?....you are a hopeless romantic :)
Love the sketch and the words, very sweet. Reminds me of my teen years. :-)
Just wonderful Brian...the sketch..the words...it surely is a beautiful thing when you have someone to share life with...happy Sunday to you and your family. XX
Sweet drawing...lovely words. Well done, as always! You must tell us about the Richmond Poetry Slam (did you "slam"?). Happy Sunday!
Great. Simply great.
I spotted you for a pickpocket right away, Brian. ;-)
nice pic Bri - hope you are having fun
T is a lucky gal
smiles from the moon
Your sketches are getting better and better. And the words, well they made me envision such a relaxed and love filled moment.
You always do such a great job.
Nice words and image too!!!
Nice sketch. Discovering another artistic side of you.
Excellent poem and sketch!
so much in these few lines - the being close and the reaching for the stars and i esp. love the barefoot mood you create with your words - really nice - and a nice drawing as well
So pretty!!
Love the softness and the sketching lines in the denim which portrays the feeling in your words! The poem is so great, i may recite it to my husband for extra points!
Oops should say when reciting poetry I mention the author - i will not pretend I wrote it :-) !! You do have a wonderful way with words!
oh, how very lovely, Brian.
sweet and down to earth
Wonderful work Brian....the poem and the piece is perfect together....
have a wonderful day!!!
Brian, i posted a sketch too with my 160 today!
very moving - you are blessed with both your words and your art!
Smiles
so lovely and tender
and
the sketch is fab Brian.
a barefoot walk under the stars....so perfect. Dude, the sketch ROCKS! Truly is there anything your not good at?
Fine art and great 160, Brian. That right brain is sizzling. Thanks for playing.
Wonderful! Words and drawing!!
You are a clever, sensitive man!
Ahhhhh I love this. Very tender.
Love the words and the tender sketch! Not often do you see people walking like that but I always smile when I do.
:)
I'd love to take that kind of walk right now...sigh. Nice image to pair with your word painting. I didn't go Brokeback at all. She's just a way skinnier chick than I am ;-)
Nice -- and am enjoying your sketchhes too.
Nice -- and am enjoying your sketchhes too.
beautiful Brian! love your drawing
thank you
This one is intimate and wonderful!
niiiiice! I'm glad you're including some of your artwork lately, too!
oh I love walking like that
this one lifted up my soul.
Nice, nice, nice. Safe travels home.
Cheers, jj
lovely lovely words and great illustration :)
The gesture in your drawing is perfect... love the feeling of it.
A perfect blending of prose and art. Perfect.
I love seeing sketches like this!
Wow love this sketch! So very cool! :0) And it works perfectly with your words, lovely piece!
Wonderful blend of words and art. Great!
Walking hand in hand....er....hand in pocket, warms the heart.
Very sweet!
Hand in the back pocket, that brings back some memories.
What a sweet image.
I love the hands in the back pockets...we are older and still do that.haha
wonderful piece, Brian..loved it!
sigh
so sweet,
and cute bums on that pair :)
thank you, Brian, on my 160 you totally "got it"
I think you captured the universe in yours!
I won't comment much, but follow when I can....too much work and no play.
Di
I've never done the back pocket thing, but I've seen other people do it. Maybe I'll try some day.
love the sketch and the poem gives me a glimpse of their day together.
thank you for your sunday sketch visit.
Delightful Brian! Yes, you create strong, wonderful imagery with words and you pencils! Great combination!
............................................................WHOA................................................WHOA.........Wow....I think this is your best, yet, Brian. Gosh...wow...it's been awhile since a piece of art has made me completely speechless. Nice job!
Yes! We Can Feel The Earth Better In Bare Feet!
Wow, that pic brings back memories. I don't see this very often now-a-days, but I certainly remember walking around like this in my teen years.
So sweet Brian. So sweet.
:)
It's all been said...love reading your comments...Brokeback Mountain???
You can say wonderful things in 160 characters, but your Sweetie could use less waist and more hip!! Maybe a cascade of hair down her back. :)
wow this is very professional, and beautiful words to go with it.
had a feeling of intimacy, very closeness.
trisha
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love this....hope you shared it with Tara...it would be precious to her.
How sweet is that!!
The magic that happens while just being with the one you care for, is absolutely worth cherishing!
A PERFECT poem-picture 160, Brian! Kudos..
Sweet sketch AND words.
Lovely, and very sweet. You romantic, you.
stirs the heavens. i hung on every word after that.
I absolutely LOVE this....the writing, the drawing......perfect.
Hi! Brian...
Nice!
...Image to compliment your very vivid words too!
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
Very sweet indeed. :)
This one must surely melt every woman's heart. And a poet's heart, too...especially "the other stirs the heavens." What an image, walking amidst the stars.
=)
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