staring at the blanket of clouds
pulled tight across the sky
i ask my son what he sees
amidst them...
"a butt."
and i won't lie,
i can see it
& i
just hope we are not
sitting at the bottom
of the toilet.
an empty bag of potato chips
crinkles as the wind
rolls it across the gravel drive
stopping briefly to say good morning
to a beer can someone tossed
in my yard during the night,
it's metallic skin a tapestry
of shadow and light.
Monday, November 15, 2010
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You have such an interesting view of EVERYTHING!
I wonder what we could make of the "butt" in the sky? Is there a corresponding Rorschach Ink Blot? :)
a perfect poem for November ... :-)
How satisfying it must be to be able to make something beautiful out of the sight of trash littering your driveway!
Love yesterday's post too - poem and artwork.
i guess its just sad how we take care of our earth...and while the moment with cole and the clouds was humorous...we tend to shat our nest far too often...
Brian, you have a way of taking every day things and spinning quite a yarn. Every now and then, we find discarded things around here too.
Good imagery.
I love the stark contrast between the dreamy aspect of cloud watching next to the dirty reality of the world.
Have about 1 beer bottle a week hit my yard. At least none of them have broken yet.
Yes, it sounds like you were trashed.
That is such a good poem on many levels. I love coming here.
Well, I prefer cloud watching to trash picking ... but if I must, I will. Nice piece Brian.
It is sad how we mistreat the earth...maybe the clouds were sending a message. I find beer cans and trash in my yard all the time. cars drive by and toss things out of their windows without a second thought.
LOL... you could also be a tube during a colonoscopy... I'd go for the toilet
LOL... thank you for the smile this morning. I just love checking out your perspective on the everyday of this life. Your words are so uplifting.
Petrina
I hope we arent in some galactic toilet either... LOL!! oh kids and their points of view
love it!
thank you
Pure philosophy Brian.
Making lemonade out of lemons. Very nice.
Your son calls it as he sees it.
Too bad about the trash. Sad that we disrespect our Mother that way.
Still, your words so simple, are yet so inricate and beautiful.
lol! Sometimes you just have to laugh, don't you? Rain will never be the same now! They call it like they see it and that's what makes kids great.
Ah, the mouth of babes.
"in my yard during the night,
it's metallic skin a tapestry
of shadow and light." - love how you can even make the trash appear beautiful!
bwahaha. Don't you just love those moments. A butt. Yeah, I have seen it too. Happy MOnday my friend.
Loved this poem! Thanks, Brian! There's beauty (and laughter) everywhere!
I loved this....I too see things in the clouds. You just have such a way with words.
It must have been quite humbling to look up and see that!
ah a glimpse into how you view the world...brilliant;)
cheers
Deep meaning Brian...GREAT! I used to always make pictures out of the clouds as a pass time...
I could see my children saying the same thing. We have a lot of litter that gets blown or left near the bus stop and sooner or later it finds it's way to our lawn, so I just pick it up and toss it in the garbage which you used nicely for wondering if you were at the bottom of a toilet....
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you got the raw "end" of the deal???
Ha - I love children and their honesty
never seen a butt in the sky before
Happy Monday my friend
A butt - beautiful anyway...
Love your quirky outlook and masterful way with words!
I guess he calls it like he sees it!
I used to live on the main thoroughfare of my subdivision and it was amazing the things I would find thrown on my lawn! Pop cans, trash, even beer bottles flung from a passing car that broke my mini-van's window!
So interesting how you stated your idea (hope we're not sitting in the toilet) before the description of the litter. I liked it, I never would have thought of doing it that way.
Very cool!
A butt, lol. Love the whole description of the bag of chips. You're cool
ah brian - you even find poetry in a beer can, someone tossed away. you have eyes that see such a lot of things, someone else wouldn't notice and that's really special
I confess.... I see butts in clouds all the time!
Ha...you never know what those clouds will look like!
litter in your yard..ugh. I caught a neighbor boy tossing a pop can in our yard one day. Needless to say, he never did it again. You should have seen his face when he realized I had been watching from the front window. ha.
I see butts everywhere, but only because I need to make peace with mine...
Driveway litter has never been so poetic. You are talented!
The boy has imagination!
As a psychologist, I'm going to have to refrain from commenting here. :-)
Love your take on garbage. You make it sound......pretty. :)
Good write, Brian.
Hope you had a good weekend.
The beauty God has given us , man seems determined to destroy..
you have just earned my undying admiration
Seriously dude, HOW do you do that!?! I mean, turn such simple things into poetry AND even include a "butt" in there!
Too funny about your son...I'm discovering what it's like to parent boys and how their minds work. Never a dull moment :-)
Two of our favorite things at our house...laying on a blanket looking at clouds and talking about the pictures they make for us...and picking up trash, where ever we go...I cannot go anywhere with the little's without them having to pick up trash...this past summer we had walked by the lake while visiting my sister and we came upon some trash that included a few beer bottles to which my little guy exclaimed, "What are people doing walking around drinking beer for?" And then, "At least they could have put their beer bottles in the recyling bin!" :)
Good post Brian...hope you've had a good Monday. :)
your poem started all lovely and floating in the air with a blanket of clouds....then it kinda went down the toilet ;-)
Too funny Brian...I love your son more and more! haaa
Kids, they tell it like it is.
Uh oh, someone's son is in the potty talk stage...
This just cracks me up (pun intended). I know very well how little boys say those kinds of things! Love this, Brian.
Oh, I love it! And Princess Nagger would have snickered and said "He said 'butt'!!" ;)
Love your perspective on this. There are great messages here about how we treat our world, and how we find beauty here in spite of it all.
Whoa!! As you always do :)
If the blanket of cloud is butt then rain must be cloud piss and snow is cloud shit. Or perhaps cloud desentry? Then sleet would be its constipation?? ( Just carrying your imagination a bit further :D ; I am not that imaginative)
On a serious note. A beautiful lyric. To think that trash would greet one another...some humans must be worse than trash , what with their indifference!
Trash and litter drives me crazy. What is wrong with people. Sheesh.
jj
Kids say and see the darndest things don't they? I posted tonight about something Natalie saw. You'll see it tomorrow at 6 AM PST. Until then, happy "tales" to you.
Looking up to a butt in the sky..makes me want to stay inside!! :)
Once again you captured so beautifully an ordinary moment in time and made it unforgettable...
Have a great day dear Brian;)
xo
Loved the view from the toilet.And then the lovely shift of gear into the chip packet in the breeze. Thanks
Oh wow, that is interesting.... love the imagination. Blessings.
So I was right, there IS beauty in everything.
From a preponderance of the evidence I would say you may not be at the bottom of the loo but you are in it because someone crapped on your lawn and pitched an empty bag of chips from somewhere.
You pulled that out of the toilet there at the end. *giggle, giggle*
God like potty humor so we might be in trouble.
I do like the contrast in images and POV from the simple and child-like to the detailed and more mature observations.
Makes the whole piece quite philosophical. No seriously. I wouldn't shit you.
One sees what one sees....lucky for you I stopped the 66 comments lol
Sad, that the earth becomes a toilet for us ...
happily it is still also our source of nutrients along with the sun, the clouds...
I hope we can appreciate it more and more.
Ya gotta call em like ya see em!
The trash rolling across your yard...why? I hate that.
Your imagination sometimes runs away with you - from clouds across the sky to being in the bottom of the loo, heehee... the wind always finds and tries to collect the loose garbage lying around, doesn't it?
A butt in your sky? Bummer! ;) Your son is so like his Dad. Creative thinking abounds!
Who knew that someone could make "trash" sound beautiful! haha Just teasing. Still, I love your perspective on everything your eyes see in your life...amazes me.
Kids have a way of seeing things as they are... and helping us do the same.
Very cool. I like the connections you made. Poetry can be found everywhere.
I wonder what motivates a person to litter--too lazy, too drunk, too not giving a damn. Soiling their own bed for sure.
the versatility of your imagination is too much brian.
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Kids look deep, past the expected to the delightful. That butt was there all along, but did you see it before he pointed it out? By adjusting your focus, your son enabled you to witness the morning exchange between the chip bag and the beer can.
What you still missed, though, was when she said to him, "Hey, Big Boy, thanks for last night."
oooh I've never seen butt clouds yet. Hahaha I didn't sit at the bottom of the toilet yet I guess
Don't you love finding things in odd places like butts in clouds?
Life is good. :-)
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