plucked a star
from the ether
to set aside,
not on some shelf
to gather dust
next to last years
bestseller or some
forgotten knick knack
but a special place
awaiting the day
she would set
in my sky
warming all my horizons
in a luminous autumn glow...
happy birthday my love!
Tell a story in 55 words. Give it a try, or just read more, go see g-man.
Yeah, it's T's birthday tomorrow...tonight I will build a cake out of Krispy Kreme doughnuts...I did name a star after her once...that way I can look up and see her, where ever I am...smiles.
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You are such a romantic! I hope she has a wonderful birthday, but with you around I can't imagine it would be anything but! :)
Ohhh so sweet Brian. Happy Birthday to your lovely wife. I guess we don't need to tell you to spoil her lots.
Blessings to you both on this day....to love someone so much is like starlight...bkm
Happy BIrthday T!!!!!!
Have a great day and a wonderful year.
Cheers, jj
Happy Birthday, T! I hope you and your mushy hubby have a great day.
:)
Aw, criminy. I think I need an insulin shot. LOL. Just kidding, Brian. Happy Birthday to your beautiful, wonderful T!
On such occasions it truly is better to give than to receive. Blessings to you my friend.
Unbelievably beautiful.
Happy Birthday to your T!
Krispy kreme cake...yum!
Lovely poem for a lovely T;Happy Birthday!
Will you share a picture of the cake?
How romantic and lovely!!! Hope T .and you have a lovely day... intrigued by the donut cake...hmmm..sounds heavenly
"awaiting the day
she would set
in my sky"
love that!
happy birthday to your T.
have fun!
i had a picture on last years birthday post...will take another and put it up tomorrow morning....we are doing her birthday in the morning due to our schedules....
awwwwwwwwwwww romance;)what a sweet couple.
happy bday T:)
Perfect way to honor your lovely wife. Happy Birthday! I'm glad you each found your someone special.
Sending the very happiest of Happy Birthday wishes to your lovely wife! This is a lovely tribute, Brian.
May her special day be wonderful and the year to come be filled with beautiful things.
Krispy Kreme doughnuts? I'm there to help celebrate.
Happy Birthday to her.
that's so sweet...happy birthday to T!
Did you fall straight down from heaven or did you float down on a cloud?
Lovely Brian...but no offense, my mind is on Krispy Kreme right now :)
Happy Birthday T!
Venus is the closest it's been to the moon since 1963...so you got that goin' for you also
Rene
Happy birthday to your special T. Love "love tribute" 55's. All the best.
T. Miller... Have a Kick Ass Birthday!
Brian...?
You did good, and it's time to move on.
how beautiful! and happy birthday to her!! love the words and star analogy-very sweet~
"...warming all my horizons.." Ohhhh! Beautiful. Happy Birthday to your Star!
DID SOMEONE SAY DOUGHNUT CAKE !!!!
i gotta see this...
AWWWWWWWW..... Happy Birthday T..... !!!!! Very Nice.. Ps you better get her a nice present... being a mom of boys is quite a job...besides..( happy Wife.. Happy Life...) Thats what I tell my hubby....LOL!!!!
such romance in 55 words!
consider it done G-man...you are the man!
Thank you my love for the special birthday poem. I treasure every word you write to me...And I can't wait to have my doughnut cake in the morning with my coffee!!! (Brian and the boys made this for me last year as a surprise because I absolutely LOVE doughnuts so I requested another this year :) )And thank you all for the birthday wishes too!!! -T
wish her happy birthday for me and that is really generous of you to do something like that for someone you care, awesome poem
):)(:(
Sounds like she's just as lucky as you are! Nice one...and give her a hug on us. ;)
What a wonderful husband you are, nothing more romantic than having a star named after you.....T is a very lucky woman as I am sure you are a lucky man.....:-) Hugs
Happy Birthday "T"
Happy Birthday, T!
True love. Happy Birthday to your dear T.
How cute to write a poem about it!
Wishing the happiest of Birthdays to T.
Great poem. ah the romantic at heart.
She's lucky to have you!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is lovely! Making a cake from doughnuts! Sounds funny! Want some help?
"warming all my horizons
in a luminous autumn glow..." this one killed me!
OMG! That is so beautiful and romantic! Your wife is a lucky lady!
How sweet... Yes she is very lucky.
I'll have one up tomorrow too.
WOW! Beautiful one, Brian!
And hey -- donut fans, you guys rock!
Sorry I've not been around as I'd wish, back to school is greatly cutting into my blogging time. Oh well, time will free up soon for me I'm sure!
blessings, poet
Aloha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
Dude, do you have a brother?!?! :D hahahah No, seriously! :D hahaha! No, really. I mean that. LOL
You are not only a great writer but a beautiful romantic. Your wife is truly blessed to have a man like you in her life...and your kids...a great father!
Happy Birthday to your sweetie!!
Aw. That's sweet.
Ok, count how many ladies are now going "awwww!"
You are too sweet for words Brian. this is just gorgeous.
Oh, and Happy Birthday to the lady of the hour, Mrs T! May your day be full of blessings T
Lovely feelings in this one, Brian. Please wish T Happy Birthday from me!
This is so lovely, Brian. And Happy Birthday, T. You are a lucky woman!
this is so lovely brian - happy birthday to your wife as well - and enjoy the cake!
What a beautiful and romantic poem! Happy birthday T!
Happy Birthday to your wife, Brian. She must love this poem! And who wouldn't love a Krispy Kreme doughnut cake? Hope you all have a fabulous day celebrating!
This is VERY sweet, Brian.
You must one day--or NIGHT!--show us which star, so we ALL can look up and 'see' her.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, "T"
from "S"
Happy Birthday to T! She is a lucky girl!
Fab 55. :-)
Naming star: so very romantic. I like that.
Donut cake: very original.
My best to your wife ...
Ain't life grand at the moment?
What a beautiful, romantic poem dedicated to the love of your life...
Have a lovely Friday and a great celebration tomorrow.;))
xoxo
Oh that is wonderful, please wish her happy birthday ....I am so glad you are both so in love. I remember reading your profile and how you spoke of your wife and was so happy for both of you. good luck with the cake.
I love romance! It certainly works its magic in our house!
Lots of love to the birthday gal - my hubby always finds a card with a badge - this year it read "The World's greatest wife" I wore it with pride!
Great 55 as ever! I hope mine makes you smile.
Denise x
Now that was nice :-)
Hau'oli La Hanau to your wife. What a wonderful story. Romance is alive and well :) Great 55. I hope the birthday was the best. :) Have a wonderful Friday :)
Love it Brian! Krispy Kreems would suffice for me as well! Blessings! Happy Birthday to the wife!
That's gorgeous. No idea what a Krispy Kreme doughnut is (being UK based) but it sounds very rich.
Wishing her (and you) a sweet birthday celebration.
"warming all your horizons" made me all warm and fuzzy.
Brilliant stuff, dude.
Aaaw that is beautiful! What a wonderful way to use 55 words. :-)
My 55
Gelukkige verjaardag to your precious T :)
Brian, you are soooo romantic.
Happy birthday, T.
Happy Birthday to T. What a romantic thought. It made me smile. My Sweet Husband always makes me Pumpkin Pie for my birthday. It's in the summer and I love pumpkin pie.
Cheers,
Kat
Happy birthday to your wife! What a lovely idea to name a star after her, to see her all the time, you make me smile :-) have a great celebration together!!
Your cake sounds amazing!! A perfect celebratory confection to ring in her special day!
Happy Birthday "T"!!!
And I love the fact that you hooked her up to a star! Very romantic!
Hugs
SueAnn
Krispy Kreme cake, now that is really over the edge. What a husband. Happy birthday to your T. I'm sure she pleases you to a T!
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Happy Birthday .Doughnuts....ummmmmm [licks lips]
Awwwwwwwww, this tears at the old heart strings, it's so beautiful Brian.
And I'll send along my happy birthday wishes but I just know it won't mean much since it's not coming from you.
Thanks for visiting my "Pop...goes the weasel". Have a super Friday, and a blessed weekend.
have a fun romantic day!
lovely 55
Adore this creative romance! Who would believe that Krispy Donuts could add so much romance! Just brilliant!
aw! That is SO sweeeet! Very nice! Please pass along my Happy Birthday wishes!
So beautiful!Happy birthday to her and enjoy those moments of joy!Have a great weekend :)
such a romantic you are sir, well done! Happy birthday to T
That's so sweet, Brian. Happy Birthday to your wife and I hope she has a wonderful day!
AWWWW! SOOO sweet!! Lucky woman :)
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Doughnuts I can see cuz it would take more than one to make a cake but in the title why is it starS
Happy birthday to your beautiful wife! May she continue to be blessed each and every day. That sounds like an awesome cake, take a picture if you can I would love to see it. Hopefully you will have a clear night filled with stars so you can count the blessings of each other among them....
I was going to comment on the lovely poem & say happy birthday, but now all I can do is stare into space & drool. I would like a cake of Krispy Kreme donuts. I'll have to tell Dr. M - but then we'd have to have a party because if there aren't other people to help eat them I would eat them ALL LOL.
You're just a big ol' softie, ain'cha? Beautiful birthday poem, my friend! :P
Ha! I'm glad I stopped back...there's a picture now! Delish!
Hope T has a great B-Day!
I hope T has a stupendous day. It's great that you honor the star of your life.
Good people were born on that date. Tomorrow is my birthday too. Ha.
Happy Birthday to your lady xand beautifully written, a romantic note
love the ode and settings!
Thanks for visiting!
A donut cake! That's an interesting idea. I think I'll make one some time out of double chocolate donuts.
You are too, too sweet! Love that cake! Yum!
Happy Birthday!
I hope I am not too late XD~
Have a wonderful day!=P
And lovely cake :3~ and that is really wonderful and romantic ;D~
Happy Birthday to a lucky lady. I am sure you must have some flaws, but you are so romantic!!!
how lovely a verse. happy birthday to your wife :)
And you are the most romantic husband ever! Enjoy your idyll! Wish it wasn't so hard to comment on blogger or I'd do it more often, but know that I do read!
Sweet...in so many ways.
What a romantic you are! This is a lovely poem, and the cake of Krispy Kreams are just what a girl ordered!!
My gosh you are such a romantic! Lucky girl. Blessings to you both and may you spend her birthday joyfully....
A crispy creme cake! Seriously! I am now so disoriented I can't think. My heart is racing. How can I work with that on my mind. Happy Birthday to your wife.
I hope she had a wonderful birthday, Brian. Cheers to you both!
oooo how romantic!
Happy birthday celebration!
ps. I have tell my husband I want to have a star of my own... :)
This is so sweet, Brain. A lovely poem and a lovely cake. Happy birthday, T! :D
Happy birthday, T! And nice 55, Brian! I could eat a tower of Krispy Kremes right now!
What a creative birthday cake; my husband would love it,for doughnuts are his favorite! Happy Birthday to your love. Happy Weekend to both of you! :) heartspell
Hi! Brian...
Happy (belated) Birthday! to "three" (women) in your life, but really she is just "one"...
...your wife, friend, and mother of your children...Here's "wishing" and "hoping" that you share many more birthdays
together!
DeeDee ;-D
Brian said,"tonight I will build a cake out of Krispy Kreme doughnuts...
Hey! Brian,
Hmmm...Got Milk?!?
Oh, man, oh man...way to put my husband in the doghouse.
My birthday was sept 21, when was your fair lady's?
Oh you're so romantic!
Happy Birthday to your love.
She's a lucky lady. :)
Beautiful. The cake looks AWESOME!
Best wishes to T for a wonderful birthday and for the coming year to bring peace and joy to you and your family.
oh my god, that is the most delicious cake i have seen in a while!
happy birthday dear, may you enjoy your day, good post brian :)
wishing her the happiest of birthdays! And how cool that you named a star after her, Mr Romantic... & Lucky Lady
I love it.
My favorite part is where it says it wasn't meant to gather dust "next to last year's bestseller".
Very sweet.
Thanks for doing Friday 55! :)
Mine's been posted here since last night, but it's taken me this long to visit and leave comments. Sorry about that.
very sweet. God gave me an autumn sweetie, too. I named a star after him, also. I wonder where that certificate is - that was 15 years ago (thanks for the memory) btw, love the donut cake. they closed the krispy kreme by us - very sad.
Well I guess my Saturday post is you then...Thanks for reading my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well
Beautiful cake! I love it :) Loved the poem, too :) She's a lucky woman.
Nice. You are an amazing husband, we can tell.
ah...every woman (and man?) would swoon over this poem.
:-) that cake gives me a sugar headache just looking at it-a truly sweet gift.
Happy one T- Bri that woman is a loved woman.
named a star?? you are a star
I guess I can't complain I got the moon
Moonie glow
Nice! Happy birthday to T. I am sure that she will like that cake a lot. I appreciate your type of thoughts for your wife. I love mine dearly.
A crispy creme cake? Be still my heart!!
And a star?
You are a super husband and such a romantic..you two were made for each other!
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