fizz
plays
at my nose,
tickling,
from a fresh
poured coca~cola;
butterflies inside me
each time our lips meet.
friends
slide,
up my legs,
warmly,
these well worn
torn blue jeans;
your arms each morning
begging me to stay.
or is that just me
wanting to.
asphalt
stretches,
between horizons,
reflecting
in the shiny
rear view mirror;
whispers carry forever
to my ears from your mouth.
everything i
see
taste
touch
reminds me
of you.
and i haven't even
got to work yet.
how will i
ever get
anything done
with you
right here
inside me?
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- Brian Miller
- Married to the most amazing woman and dad of two adventurous boys. I am figuring out what life has in store next. Enjoy the journey.
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Hi Brian,
This is so hauntingly beautiful. It truly shows how much you love your wife and the life around you. I like the asphalt in the rearview mirror, I have never associated it with leaving your love behind.
As always you are just amazing in what you have expressed.
Thank you.
God bless.
The ecstasy and the agony!!!
Wow, that was amazing!
Love does haunt.
I have many morning like this. I carry my love with me....always.
Ack. Amazing, Brian. Wow.
You are a happy man in love. :)
Sweetnessandlove. (Touches my heart)
Snap out of it! (Slap) hahahaha!
I said it before, you two are very lucky!
Very very nice Brian. I am thankful that you have such a love in your life. :)
that was beautiful!
She is lucky, so are you. Isn't it nice to feel that way about someone?
Kat
Love is wonderful and powerful. Your poem is refreshing. We live in an age that is losing romance. nice work :)
One of your best, sir!
for the record, i am the lucky one.
Nice! Your wife must love you to pieces, Brian :).
take another cold shower! truely epic prose
You are one sexy man. And that's not counting the pictures I have of you naked.
Pretty sexy here! :) The Bach
Wonderful. Simply beautiful!
This is totally ROMANTIC.. Beautifully expressed.. one of my favorites I read that you wrote.
And obviously you both are the lucky ones..
Do you have a single Uncle in his late 40s or early 50s....??
(teasing).
You drink coke in the morning before going to work? Coke can cause butterflies in the stomach you know. And that fizzy sweet taste can linger all day.
Proper breakfast may help :)
You are such a sweetie! I love how you love your wife.
Now, I'm off to beg my husband to write some poetry for me.
You are going to make a lot of husbands mad tonight......they should of thought of doing this.
It is very beautiful Brian....Hugs
i do know this particular haunt.
you are lucky yours isn't a real ghost and that the arms wrapping round you are flesh and blood.
exquisite, Brian. like i said, never take it for granted. i sense, somehow, you won't...
simply beautiful. Sigh. I wish that one day I find that. I had it once and let it go. It was the right decision at that time, but I will always wonder, "what if?". You words remind me of this.
Hugs to you for making me connect to my inner romantic, but if you tell anyone I said that, I will gut you like a bass on the side of lazy Texas river. :)
Oh my oh my
You are out of your mind in poetry musing
With that many followers, you must spend all day at a computer, Ha!
I can't type that fast.
Thanks for following
Thanks for writing
Please give my muse your feedback, she needs feeding.
Your writing blows me away, when I'm missing my muse, I find yours.
Very kinetic, very nice!
What a beautiful tribute to love~!
Haunting and lovely... these words will stay with me.
xo, Mango
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww
Awwwwwwwwwwww and then some more Awwwwwwwwwwwww
i mean, what else can you expect from your man.. awwww
one of the most romantic poems i have evvvver read.
wish i had written it.. or better still, someone had written it for me :P :D
Your wife's eyes must mist over when she reads your expressions of love. Mine do.
Oh now I need a freshly poured Coke!
How beautifully romantic. There's nothing sweeter than a man in love with his wife. Except for a cupcake, maybe. Hee Hee!
So beautiful! It is always so tough to have "multiple" lives and have to leave one world to go to another. You just expressed it so amazingly!
Wow...I never realized anyone could love coca cola quite that much... ;)
I've known this too adn it is incredible, isn't it? Wow. So love this. Brilliant. How wonderful love is.
Is this a whisper of sweet nothings? As much as I wish my husband could express himself the way you do.... I think I will just love him the way he is .... you know .... handy! He gives me such great blog material....
love is beautiful!
you know i love, love!
much love!
This is really lovely. The trick is to keep this beautiful, haunting love going for the long haul - through many years.
PG
love forever wrapped in memory...
Ah, you are a romantic poet and express your feelings so boldly!
Loved this as this is truly how love is...
xo
Zuzana
Yes it is good to have to force yourself to focus away from something so delicious.
Sigh.
I'm sending Larry right over. He needs to read this.
Wonderful writing, wonderful relationship, who can ask for more.
This speaks of love-- both physical and emotional. How cool!
This speak so fluently of love!! It is hard to breath sometimes; when one is so in love!
Hugs
SueAnn
I know this feeling all too well...Its great isnt it :)
Sigh, I absolutely adore poetry that is felt from the moment the first few words are read.
Sweet!
WONDERFUL and HOPELESSLY romantic!!
I LOVE THAT!I know the feeling!You expressed it really well :)
Awe. Deeply sweet...passionate.
Being loved and loving someone back completely is truly one of life's wonders.
Having been with my ex husband for 15 years and only now experiencing this with my hubby, I can't believe I spent all those years without knowing true love.
well, if you need an reason for not being concentrated at work, glad it's such a good one!
WOW!
a beautiful love poem. think of the ecstacy if you whispered these words to the woman you love ...
warm smiles,
Take me Mandingo! Oh, sorry, your words, like poetry, touch me. Although I jest, your wife must know how much she means to you. Never stop writing to her heart. Blessings.
Keep her right there inside you, Brian.
I am thinking of the perfect Valentine's Day gift for your wife - all of your beautifully written, incredibly romantic love poems tied together with a red satin ribbon. Sealed with a kiss.
wow,
that is amusing!
Your wifes lips taste like Cola?
You need to buy some Strawberry Chapstick!
gman...lol. think more like decadent chocolate drizzled over strawberries.
There is so much love in the post I want to cry, happy tears. You know what you are talking about, I can tell, because I know love too. I am happy for you both.
wow mate excellent poem, great imagery, enjoyed the read, well done...
That was so romantic!
:)
I'm telling you . . . Send these to Hallmark or something!!!
Oh my gosh that is the most beautiful thing I've ever read! That is just so sweet, I would just die if my husband read that to me!
Brian, this is soooo beautiful! What a lucky wife you have!
haha I like Otie's "snap out of it!"
she's gonna be the death of you man.
xxoo
That's haunting. And beautiful.
Reminds me of E.E. Cummings for some reason..
Aaaw...I hope I find a love like that one day...
Thanks for visiting my blog.
I especially love the line, "or is that just me wanting to."
Whoosh
Brill
the answer ?
you wont.
you asked...
sexy writing full of love!!
WOW B!!
Im lucky enough to be with a beautiful soul who starts my every day with a poem he writes for me while I sleep.
Your words remind me of how he sees me, how he describes it. I adore him and I know after reading this that you have someone who adores you as equally as you adore her!
xxme
What a beautiful piece! What a wonderful tribute to the love you and your wife share. See you Friday!
What a romantic piece! I love it!
Oh. I remember these days. I'm sorry the passion like this faded, but my love for my husband still grows. I wish to see him more during the day too.
This is beautiful.
Wow! I hope your wife read this one!
Doesn't love rock?
Thanks for this one Brian.
Smiles!
Big sigh.
This is why, when I catch up on my reading, I read every single post of yours.
It's fabulous.
jj
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