Her voice pulls at my inmost parts, beckoning me further and further…I know I should not, but I give in letting her lead, to where I don’t know…
This is a true story, at least what aging minds can recollect. My cousin told his part here, now this is my side....and the rest of the story...
Empty, the house sits dark and quiet on the hill, blue light leaking from the rear bedroom. My parents have vacated to the beach, with do this and don’t thats left hanging heavily over my neck like a guillotine. My social life is such at the time that an all night marathon of Super Tecmo Bowl sounds enrapturing.
No matter what Mike says, he can hold his own, though not this time. Mike and I might have been brothers in another life or world, but this one fated us to be cousins and the Sunday afternoons of our adolescence were spent sucking every last bit of marrow left in the bones of this grand adventure.
Vanquishing him on the virtual field of play, the hands of the clock approaching the tipping point where darkness bleeds into a new day, Mike heads down the long hall leading into the front of the house in search of refreshment. She must have watched him leave, waiting for just this moment...
Sticky sweet, her voice twines fingers around my heart giving a tender jerk, 'Brian, come here'.
How could I not follow?
She plays so well, ducking into the darkness, passing bedrooms, pulling me along with a trail of promises wrapped up in 'come here'.
Who is she? I do not care, I only want to know her.
Blood courses through my veins in a raging torrent, my pace quickening to capture her before she disappears. Rounding the corner…
WHAM!
Sprawling on the hard wood floor, my cousin and I survey each other, not wanting to ask the questions that hide behind our eyes, for fear she is still lingering.
Where…?
Did you hear?
But she is no more, vanished beyond even the shadows. Perhaps she never was, only a figment of our youthful imaginations. But for one night she visited us, if only in disembodied voice.
A voice we will never forget.
If you have not met Mike, visit him at Hey Cabo. He is a great writer of both story and song. And sometimes he even tells the stories that go with the 'disclosing' comments he leaves here, much to my chagrin. lol.
Monday, January 25, 2010
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Gives me shivers! Creepy eve!
Ghost tease, that's just not right.
wow.. you and cabo are cousins...sweet..!!
Wicked!
little bit scary....
Don't you wonder about our youthful imaginations? Perhaps we should trust that there are things that are more 'real' when we are children then as adults.
her fingers...
Now that is eerie. He was all the way in the kitchen and you were in the den and you each heard a female voice enticing and leading. Too much. You did a good job sharing the story.
:X that is scary Brian.
Wow. What a cool story. Seriously. Thanks for sharing.
A totally awesome story
Brian!!
Hugs
SueAnn
Very cool story! I have never had any kind of ghost encounter...Wait! What was that??? LOL!
oooh very cool! I jsut went to cabo and read his too. I tried to follow, but it wouldn't let me :(
he must be anti-bams... boo
Yikes!! Scary story!! But sooooooo well written. :)
You both heard her voice? Creee-peee!! I believe you, since I've had plenty of experiences at WM.
see. i just don't think ghosts are scary. i've seen one. and there's one that lives in my 160 year old farmhouse. but then, maybe i've only encountered friendly ghosts. who knows? ;) the Celts were big believers in the Spiritual Realm and that it existed in close proximity to our own world, so i think it's sweet she visited both of you and i can imagine her wanting to encounter the two of you. Especially nude taking polaroids of each other. You freaks. HA ;) (p.s. my first bid is uh...5 dollars - can I pay in Canadian?)
p.s. i'll pay a little higher for one's of Mike? ;)
Teased by a ghost hey? Thats only awesome!
Great story, I love the thought of a sultry siren of ghost. Its nice to know you can still deploy your weapons of mass seduction in the after life. Sweet!
Great ghost story, I love stories like that. Visited Mike and you are quite right, he is a good writer. Cheers!
Like it. This, like another I mentioned before, seems like groundwork for an excellent fiction piece.
Still waiting to see some of your work, yo!
Your life isn't dull is it? I tune out those voices.
Smiles!
I love how you two shared this story... :) You all shouldn't be scared though. It sounds like she was a friendly ghost. Those polaroids I can only dream of, and I just might do that. I never did hear about the "Miller run" before, but I can imagine what it was like... :) Enjoyed the read.
A writing muse?
Great storytelling... I remember many scary incidents like this in my childhood!
Sprawling on hard wood floor can be painful. Carpet is much better.
Imagination or not, these are the best experiences.;) And so much enticement can lie in a voice, right...
Loved it.
xo
Zuzana
Suckered by a ghost for her amusement. Adolescence was so wonderful.
Shiver me bones! Read both parts, I did (grinning at the remarks your cuz made, heh, heh )...
it makes me think of "A Forest" by The Cure
::que Twilight Zone theme::
Okay..heebie jeebies :0D
namaste
Spooky - Off to visit cabo!
No way! Great story...true story? ACK!
I am off to meet Mike!
*shivers* you do these eerie ones so well!
ghost story!! love it. Can you be rented for summer campfires???
Wow. Kind of eerie and unexplainable. Nice tale of the unknown.
very cool, I like reading both of your accounts in very different styles!
Excellent read, Brian! Love when 'things' occur that cannot be truly explained.
I'm with Ms. Hen "Wicked"...;)
smiles~
Calli
WOW...tantalizing ghost story.
I love it,
It has been a long time without thinking about ghost...
wishing you a morning as fresh as your post,
I thought only good things were going to happen....
Okay... i'm officially creeped out. You both heard her voice?? double the creepy!
Polaroids please!! I have nothing to bid, but my udnying love!!
Looks like brilliant writing runs in the family ;) How cool is that??
I am SO glad it's 9 a.m. and not 9 p.m. or I would be curled on the couch covered under a mountain of blankets hiding from the ghosts!
Even though I love a good ghost story, I have never seen one ghost- ever...
Wow! That's quite a story. Very curious. I loved haunting ghost stories when I was growing up. Not the scary, haunting, but the sad haunting.
NICE!!!
Awesome story - well done. I love the little tingle you get when reliving these childhood adventures.
I remember sitting around with my friends when we were a bit younger using the Ouija board or the Magic 8 ball - we would shut out the lights and convince ourselves of the spirits that were lurking around. Shivers.
Did that really happen? I mean, really? 'Coz I've always heard of this kinda stuff from friends-of-friends-of -friends, and the closest (and the most recent) has been about a friend of a friend... but this one definitely tops the list.
I've still got goosebumps. That never happened before.
That happened...? Really??
I love ghost stories and this was fantastic, well done and im sleeping with the light on tonight lol.
Oh man, that was creeeeeepy!
Hey, how is your little dude now after the mishap and your mom too...is she doing much better?
I love this and any story related to ghosts! I'll have to check out Cabos blog...enjoy the rest of the week! :)
Did you get my other comment? I had trouble signing on to leave it, so if this is a repeat, just delete it.
Is this a true story?
Awesome!
We lived in a Victorian house for 14 years that was haunted. No voices, no sightings, but we had some amazing things happen....
Wow,really cool!hehe.As we were,we stay.Beware if I die first ^^:)
Brian! Brian! So sorry to interupt you on such a well written story, but we need you back at the Kewl Beanz...something is about to go down....
I love a good ghost story. Off to check out Mike's version.
jj
That is spooky!
Brian!!!!
Absolutely perfect the way you two split the story into the two relevant perspectives.
Saw a ghost in Nantucket once. I hope I never see another. He was not happy.
Interesting...I wonder who she was? Did you know anything about the history of the house?
Wish I hear a vice like that too in my lonely nights. Hi! What these ghosts are looking for? Are they blind enough not to see me sitting alone and in need of a company?
Shut up already!!!! OMG this is craziness! And to imagine you both are left spralled on the floor to find no one . . . .just the sound of a muse's voice leading you down a hall going no where. . . .
I love ghost stories. This was creepy,scary, and thrilling. Thanks Brian.
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