Monday, January 25, 2010

Her Voice (a ghost story)

Her voice pulls at my inmost parts, beckoning me further and further…I know I should not, but I give in letting her lead, to where I don’t know…

This is a true story, at least what aging minds can recollect. My cousin told his part here, now this is my side....and the rest of the story...

Empty, the house sits dark and quiet on the hill, blue light leaking from the rear bedroom. My parents have vacated to the beach, with do this and don’t thats left hanging heavily over my neck like a guillotine. My social life is such at the time that an all night marathon of Super Tecmo Bowl sounds enrapturing.

No matter what Mike says, he can hold his own, though not this time. Mike and I might have been brothers in another life or world, but this one fated us to be cousins and the Sunday afternoons of our adolescence were spent sucking every last bit of marrow left in the bones of this grand adventure.

Vanquishing him on the virtual field of play, the hands of the clock approaching the tipping point where darkness bleeds into a new day, Mike heads down the long hall leading into the front of the house in search of refreshment. She must have watched him leave, waiting for just this moment...

Sticky sweet, her voice twines fingers around my heart giving a tender jerk, 'Brian, come here'.

How could I not follow?

She plays so well, ducking into the darkness, passing bedrooms, pulling me along with a trail of promises wrapped up in 'come here'.

Who is she? I do not care, I only want to know her.

Blood courses through my veins in a raging torrent, my pace quickening to capture her before she disappears. Rounding the corner…

WHAM!

Sprawling on the hard wood floor, my cousin and I survey each other, not wanting to ask the questions that hide behind our eyes, for fear she is still lingering.

Where…?

Did you hear?

But she is no more, vanished beyond even the shadows. Perhaps she never was, only a figment of our youthful imaginations. But for one night she visited us, if only in disembodied voice.

A voice we will never forget.




If you have not met Mike, visit him at Hey Cabo. He is a great writer of both story and song. And sometimes he even tells the stories that go with the 'disclosing' comments he leaves here, much to my chagrin. lol.

62 comments:

Cabo said...

Gives me shivers! Creepy eve!

Captain Dumbass said...

Ghost tease, that's just not right.

Ms Hen said...

wow.. you and cabo are cousins...sweet..!!

Titanium said...

Wicked!

AmyLK said...

little bit scary....

mama-face said...

Don't you wonder about our youthful imaginations? Perhaps we should trust that there are things that are more 'real' when we are children then as adults.

her fingers...

TechnoBabe said...

Now that is eerie. He was all the way in the kitchen and you were in the den and you each heard a female voice enticing and leading. Too much. You did a good job sharing the story.

Maggie said...

:X that is scary Brian.

only a movie said...

Wow. What a cool story. Seriously. Thanks for sharing.

slommler said...

A totally awesome story
Brian!!
Hugs
SueAnn

otin said...

Very cool story! I have never had any kind of ghost encounter...Wait! What was that??? LOL!

rxBambi said...

oooh very cool! I jsut went to cabo and read his too. I tried to follow, but it wouldn't let me :(
he must be anti-bams... boo

Mighty M said...

Yikes!! Scary story!! But sooooooo well written. :)

willow said...

You both heard her voice? Creee-peee!! I believe you, since I've had plenty of experiences at WM.

the b in subtle said...

see. i just don't think ghosts are scary. i've seen one. and there's one that lives in my 160 year old farmhouse. but then, maybe i've only encountered friendly ghosts. who knows? ;) the Celts were big believers in the Spiritual Realm and that it existed in close proximity to our own world, so i think it's sweet she visited both of you and i can imagine her wanting to encounter the two of you. Especially nude taking polaroids of each other. You freaks. HA ;) (p.s. my first bid is uh...5 dollars - can I pay in Canadian?)

the b in subtle said...

p.s. i'll pay a little higher for one's of Mike? ;)

powdergirl said...

Teased by a ghost hey? Thats only awesome!

Great story, I love the thought of a sultry siren of ghost. Its nice to know you can still deploy your weapons of mass seduction in the after life. Sweet!

Kate Hanley said...

Great ghost story, I love stories like that. Visited Mike and you are quite right, he is a good writer. Cheers!

JeffScape said...

Like it. This, like another I mentioned before, seems like groundwork for an excellent fiction piece.

Still waiting to see some of your work, yo!

Green-Eyed Momster said...

Your life isn't dull is it? I tune out those voices.

Smiles!

järnebrand said...

I love how you two shared this story... :) You all shouldn't be scared though. It sounds like she was a friendly ghost. Those polaroids I can only dream of, and I just might do that. I never did hear about the "Miller run" before, but I can imagine what it was like... :) Enjoyed the read.

Ronda Laveen said...

A writing muse?

LadyFi said...

Great storytelling... I remember many scary incidents like this in my childhood!

mo.stoneskin said...

Sprawling on hard wood floor can be painful. Carpet is much better.

Protege said...

Imagination or not, these are the best experiences.;) And so much enticement can lie in a voice, right...
Loved it.
xo
Zuzana

the walking man said...

Suckered by a ghost for her amusement. Adolescence was so wonderful.

subby said...

Shiver me bones! Read both parts, I did (grinning at the remarks your cuz made, heh, heh )...

Goofball said...

it makes me think of "A Forest" by The Cure

Kim A. said...

::que Twilight Zone theme::

Okay..heebie jeebies :0D

namaste

Eternally Distracted said...

Spooky - Off to visit cabo!

Jill said...

No way! Great story...true story? ACK!
I am off to meet Mike!

Shadow said...

*shivers* you do these eerie ones so well!

Kulio said...

ghost story!! love it. Can you be rented for summer campfires???

Daniel said...

Wow. Kind of eerie and unexplainable. Nice tale of the unknown.

tori said...

very cool, I like reading both of your accounts in very different styles!

Calli said...

Excellent read, Brian! Love when 'things' occur that cannot be truly explained.

I'm with Ms. Hen "Wicked"...;)

smiles~
Calli

JennyMac said...

WOW...tantalizing ghost story.

jingle said...

I love it,
It has been a long time without thinking about ghost...

wishing you a morning as fresh as your post,

Pseudonymous High School Teacher said...

I thought only good things were going to happen....

Michele said...

Okay... i'm officially creeped out. You both heard her voice?? double the creepy!

Polaroids please!! I have nothing to bid, but my udnying love!!

Looks like brilliant writing runs in the family ;) How cool is that??

Meeko Fabulous said...

I am SO glad it's 9 a.m. and not 9 p.m. or I would be curled on the couch covered under a mountain of blankets hiding from the ghosts!

buffalodick said...

Even though I love a good ghost story, I have never seen one ghost- ever...

Corrie Howe said...

Wow! That's quite a story. Very curious. I loved haunting ghost stories when I was growing up. Not the scary, haunting, but the sad haunting.

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

NICE!!!

Magpie said...

Awesome story - well done. I love the little tingle you get when reliving these childhood adventures.

Deb said...

I remember sitting around with my friends when we were a bit younger using the Ouija board or the Magic 8 ball - we would shut out the lights and convince ourselves of the spirits that were lurking around. Shivers.

Iddy Albatross said...

Did that really happen? I mean, really? 'Coz I've always heard of this kinda stuff from friends-of-friends-of -friends, and the closest (and the most recent) has been about a friend of a friend... but this one definitely tops the list.

I've still got goosebumps. That never happened before.

That happened...? Really??

William Manson © 2010 said...

I love ghost stories and this was fantastic, well done and im sleeping with the light on tonight lol.

blueviolet said...

Oh man, that was creeeeeepy!

Hey, how is your little dude now after the mishap and your mom too...is she doing much better?

Lulda Casadaga said...

I love this and any story related to ghosts! I'll have to check out Cabos blog...enjoy the rest of the week! :)

The Retired One said...

Did you get my other comment? I had trouble signing on to leave it, so if this is a repeat, just delete it.

Is this a true story?
Awesome!
We lived in a Victorian house for 14 years that was haunted. No voices, no sightings, but we had some amazing things happen....

Candie Bracci said...

Wow,really cool!hehe.As we were,we stay.Beware if I die first ^^:)

Lizzie said...

Brian! Brian! So sorry to interupt you on such a well written story, but we need you back at the Kewl Beanz...something is about to go down....

Joanna Jenkins said...

I love a good ghost story. Off to check out Mike's version.

jj

She Writes said...

That is spooky!

Lizzie said...

Brian!!!!

tattytiara said...

Absolutely perfect the way you two split the story into the two relevant perspectives.

Barbara said...

Saw a ghost in Nantucket once. I hope I never see another. He was not happy.

The girl with the flour in her hair said...

Interesting...I wonder who she was? Did you know anything about the history of the house?

Ekanthapadhikan said...

Wish I hear a vice like that too in my lonely nights. Hi! What these ghosts are looking for? Are they blind enough not to see me sitting alone and in need of a company?

Pastor Sharon said...

Shut up already!!!! OMG this is craziness! And to imagine you both are left spralled on the floor to find no one . . . .just the sound of a muse's voice leading you down a hall going no where. . . .

Viola said...

I love ghost stories. This was creepy,scary, and thrilling. Thanks Brian.