Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Lost & Found

Hey lady...his voice pushes through the crush of bodies that rushes between them in her departure. Callous fingers reach into empty air, as her fleeing back all but disappearing from his view.

Hey, stop that lady...a crowd of eyes cut a quick glance before faces turn, enough of their own business to tend to in the rush to collapse exhausted when the holiday finally arrives. Auburn hair flows in her wake like the train of a dress, caught in a warm breeze.

Excuse me, excuse me...anxiousness intoxicates his movements, making them clumsy as his efforts to part the sea of humanity only leaving him further and further behind. Questions taunt his thoughts with possibilities if he fails to reach her.

Hey...a window opens, adrenaline fuels his flight, a lone fingernail drawing a slight touch upon the elbow of her black coat.

What...stress hisses through each syllable, her eyes rake the entirety of his person like sand, finding naught and reflect that back upon him in an unseen wave.

You dropped this...soft textured leather of the wallet, a sharp contrast to the rough pads of his hand. Stark silence sits between them, oxygen snuffed from her lungs, as she wraps her well manicured fingers around the lost, now found.

Happy Holidays...his whisper fills the void, a twinkle escaping the corner of his eye. A softening smile accompanies the quick turn on her heal as she heads to the door once again, leaving the man in his wheelchair in the aisle, a rock in the stream of people caught up in the chaos of Christmas.

Merry Christmas...our eyes meet as I slip from the clothes racks, an unspoken understanding passing between us, that joy comes not in how they respond but in the simple act of giving. I swear I hear a Ho, Ho, Ho, as he wheels out of sight.


I hope all of you have a magical holiday season. A year ago, I never would have believed where this blog has gone in the last year and all the wonderful friends I would make. You give me smiles each day with your comments, emails and the occasional phone call. Knowing you is one gift that won't fit under my tree. Thank you. ~Brian

83 comments:

♥ Braja said...

Holy crap, you use my blog name and don't even LINK ME??? Sheesh....friends...can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em....

♥ Braja said...

Brilliant, as usual, Brian...

tattytiara said...

Wow very cool - you caught so much motion with your phrasing. Happy holidays to you!

Mama Zen said...

Merry Christmas! And, thank you for the beautiful story.

Dianne said...

Thank you for your smiles, Brian.
I listen to your comments.
Any constructive notes in 2010 will be welcomed. I admire your writing.
Dianne

Daniel said...

Nice one. Thanks for being so loyal to my blog this past year. Your effort, time, and energy were MOST appreciated. Have a great holiday my friend.

Betsy said...

Loved this post! :)

Safe travels to you and your family! Enjoy each other..and the season! :)

Jaime said...

Merry Christmas Brian.

Cabo said...

That was lovely, Brother.

smiles4u said...

Wow! Your words cut to my heart as I picture all of this playing out. Brian, your brillance with words never cease to amaze me and bring such feelings and thoughts to mind. I love your words. I enjoy whatever you write and the comments you leave me at my place endure to my heart because of their sincerity. Thank you. How I found my way to your wonderful place here I cannot recall but I don't believe in accidents. :)I am just so thankful that I did. Bless you and your wife and children this Christmas season and always. May love, joy and peace surround you and yours. Thank you for the smiles you bring me! XX Lori

otin said...

Very nice story of generosity and caring! We always tend to think that people will keep anything that they find. I have found that not to be true.

It has been an amazing year, many gifts to be shared by all!!

Kris said...

It’s that time of year again! I’m doing the rounds and apologising for my complete failure to more regularly offer comment on everybody’s incredible efforts for the year. I know how hard it can be to keep up with the daily grind of everyday posting, and want to thank you for your efforts.

I especially want to wish festive greetings for all from down here at [nearly] the end of the world, the bottom of Tasmania.

So, if you could delete whatever is not applicable, I’d like to wish you a very pleasant/merry/happy/wonderful/safe Amaterasu; Ashurall; Beiwe; Choimus; Christmas; Dazh Boh; Dongzhi; Goru; Hanukkah; Hogmanay; Junkanoo; Karachun; Koleda; Lenæa; Meán Geimhridh; Modranicht; New Years; Ras as-Sana; Rozhanitsa Feast; Şeva Zistanê; shōgatsu; Summer Solstice [if you're in the Southern Hemisphere]; Sviatki; Vánoce; Winter solstice [if you're in the Northern Hemisphere]; Yalda; Yule-tide; Ziemassvētki; and Коляда!

With a hearty three cheers from Kris, Jen, Henry and Ezra!

JML said...

You really are a talented writer. Another great story!

lakeviewer said...

Ah! That old magic, at the right time, the right pace. Beautiful story, Brian. A treat for your friends in blogland.
Thanks.
Enjoy the holidays.

Chhaya said...

Awwwww... it was so nice :)

Merry Christmas!

Ocean Girl said...

I was hoping for some romance! Oh well.

Merry Christmas Brian Miller and family.

Meeko Fabulous said...

Tis the season! :) I've seen many more acts of kindness this year as I've done my shopping. Of course, I'm not at the stores right now . . . So I can't vouch for anything in the past 48 hours and the 24 to come . . . LoL! :)

Kathleen said...

How on earth did he catch up with her?!

Amazing and lovely.

Merry Christmas, Brian!

TechnoBabe said...

We hear so much of the bad things people do, it is a comfort to read something like this story and know there are so many people out there who do the right thing. I am so intrigued with your particular writing style, a taste here, a hint there, tantalizing. I have enjoyed reading your writing very much as you know. Blessings to you and your family this Christmas, and special hug to your mom for her speedy recovery.

Lisa (aka LadyWanderlust) said...

another good one. May 2010 bring continued blessings to your blog, new friendships, and your family.

Lisa

Captain Dumbass said...

Merry Christmas, Brian. Wonder where your blog will be this time next year.

Shadow said...

i'm more than pleased and happy to read your lovely words every day. merry merry christmas!!!

Bridgette said...

Merry Christmas!

Protege said...

I have enjoyed reading your sensitive, romantic and poetic writing these past few months Brian and I would like to wish you and your wonderful family a Merry Christmas and in the New Year all the very best.:)
xoxo
Zuzana

Maggie May said...

Hoping you and your lovely family have very Happy Christmas.
Great story!

Nuts in May

Valerie said...

Brian, how's that for marvellous phraseology.
I thank you for your support during the year and for the pleasure gained from reading your indescribably brilliant posts. Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Brian Miller said...

a special thank you to braja who who originated the phrase lost and found...smiles. do go visit her before i get sued for copyright infringement...smiles.

slommler said...

Beautiful story and well crafted words! Thank you so much for all of them!
Hugs and Merry Christmas
SueAnn

California Girl said...

Brian, this caught me off guard. Your writing has progressed so much. This is tight and moves the reader along and surprises. Perfect.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Bonnie, Original Art Studio said...

Beautiful build up of tension to the climax of your scene.

I, too, am grateful to have found you Brian, your writing and comments have enriched my life.

Goofball said...

isn't it fun to chase someone to give back something lost and you can just barely catch them.

She could have given him a bigger thank you though. Pooh.



Merry Christmas to you and your family!

CatLadyLarew said...

Thank you, Brian, for all the wonderful stories you've given us this past year. Have a wonderful holiday with your family!

secret agent woman said...

Lovely. Merry Christmas to you and your family.

secret agent woman said...

Lovely. Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Beth said...

Brian,
You are a gift! Giving is far more fun to me than receiving.
Merry Christmas!
Beth

Lorraine said...

So touching and magical, your writing evokes so much in me, even emotions I thought I had buried, thanks for that friend...I wish you, your lovely wife and children, a wonderful Christmas xxx

Jill said...

A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS to you too Brian...enjoy your sweet wife and adorable little boys!! I hope, too, that you Mom's recovery is going well.

What fun it is to make bloggy friends!

As for the gentleman in the wheelchair...he is one of God's angels!

Hater Von G said...

Brilliant! I love your blog, Ive been looking forward to see what you have every day for me to read. Love it.

Happy holidays to you and your family. :)

Kathy's Klothesline said...

I saved yours until last. I like to savor your writing with a cup of tea or coffee and you never disappoint. Today you have captured the heart of Christmas with your words. I am so glad to have stumbled upon your blog! Merry Christmas to you and your sweet family!

Vince Farrell said...

Merry Christmas and a Blessed 2010 to you and your family!

tony said...

Hi Brian, Wishing You & Yours A Brilliant Christmas.Bestest Wishes From tony.

darsden said...

WoW!!! Beautiful and perfect for this time of year. Merry Christmas and Have a very Blessed New Year. Look forward to what you have for us next year :-))

Maggie said...

Maybe you have blessed Christmas. *hugs to you and your family!*

the b in subtle said...

as I'm about to forge ahead into the onslaught of Christmas last-minute-rush today with my baby strapped to me, I am reminded to breathe and take my time and just to relish the beauty of this season. what a beautiful post, Brian - kindness can come in such small, yet effective ways. especially when we're not exactly looking for it or taking the time to do so or to practice it ourselves. Lochie and i will head to my twin sister's family tonight for some hollyday fun with two of his younger cousins. I'll be there the next couple of days, but look forward to more from you next week! (thanks for stopping by my site and taking the time to read my looong thing from last night). happy HAPPY holly days to you and your family! and all the happiness and Joy you can handle in 2010!

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Brian:)

LET ME WISH YOU AND YOUR FAMILY A WONDERFUL CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR.

It is not surprising that you have so many wonderful friends because you are wonderful too not only as a person but also by your amazing writing. There is always an element of mystery and keeps one guessing till the end. Just like the present one. At first I thought that lady was going to commit suicide and therefore the man was desperate to stop her. The end was totally astonishing. I was no where close to the conclusion.

Besides your ability to keep in touch with your friends is another fantastic quality in you which I admire most.As soon a post is published you immediately appear as though by magic. I am sure you have a crystal ball:)

Merry Christmas Brian:)
Joseph

Pamela Terry and Edward said...

Happy Christmas!! From both of us!

Joanna Jenkins said...

I wondered where this was going-- Glad it had a happy ending. and I'm glad you have the ability to see the magical things you write so beautifully about. Thanks for a great year of reading Brian. It's been a real treat.

Merry Christmas to you and your family!

jj

PS I'm still laughing over Braja's first comment :-)

Megan said...

Merry Christmas to you and your family and best wishes to Mom, especially!

So glad to have found your blog. I don't always comment, but I always read it!

xo

Ronda Laveen said...

Great piece!

"...a rock in the stream of people caught up in the chao..."

Do you realize that this is what you are to the beings who read your blog?

Blessed be.

Rochellers said...

That was a jewel of a story - thank you and happy holidays!

tori said...

Lovely...have a wonderful Christmas and a great new year! I look forward to reading your blog with every post you write. Thanks for sharing your talents!

Nancy said...

Merry Christmas, Brian!

Travel & Dive Girl said...

Brian, I think I speak for many when I say thanks for all the joy you have brought us throughout the year. Have a spectacular Christmas with your family. Merry Christmas...

Kaylen said...

That's so beautifully written.

Happy Holidays to you and yours!
Best wishes for a great new year. :)

justsomethoughts... said...

a gift indeed
but in the other direction

have a happy and healthy holiday season, brian
it's truly a treat to have discovered you

Wsprsweetly Of Cottages said...

Brian, I just discovered you on SMB's blog.
What a great post. I must come back and explore when I have time to think and give this blog it's proper due. I think I have discovered something wonderful!
The evening is getting on and I am up to my neck in preparations and must get back to work. I have a huge family so I have my work cut out for me on Holidays.
A very Merry Christmas to you and your famiy, Brian.
Mona

only a movie said...

Brian - that was wonderful. Perfect sentiment for this time of year.
I am very happy that we have met in blogland.
Have a great Christmas - enjoy your family and have fun. xo

Bridgette said...

Thank you for your comment on my blog. I hope you and your family have a very Merry Christmas!

Cinnamon said...

Wishing you and your family a very happy Christmas. I have so enjoyed reading your blog over the past year xxx

Eaton Bennett said...

Have a wonderful Christmas, you and your family. :)

and, that was a great Christmas write, loved it!

Eaton

subby said...

Brian, you're not gonna believe this( or you might ); sans the running after her, I returned a dropped to-do list to a very grateful woman, just a few days ago!

The Retired One said...

Love this one, Brian! You never know what life form an angel takes, do you???

Back atcha regarding other bloggers being gifts...
and thank YOU for being a Follower/reader on my blog and leaving such encouraging comments on my photography and humor!

buffalodick said...

Nice story, perfect for this day!

enchantedoak said...

Brian, Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year to you. Thanks for becoming a friend of mine.
Chris

Stacy (the Random Cool Chick) said...

Beautiful and magical all wrapped up in a neat Christmas package! :)

Wishing you a Very Merry Christmas, Brian! :)

...mmm... said...

I love your last line here. how true is that? :)

Well, i jsut wanted to with you, Brian, a very happy christmas to you and your family. May it be filled with warmth and love. Thank you so much for your posts to enliven our hearts and minds. you are certainly building up a treasure here which i hope continues for a very long time further indeed.

Be blessed with joy through this season.

--Mmm.

Vodka Mom said...

Merry Christmas, my friend!

Lizzie said...

Merry Christmas to you, Brian.!! So glad I discovered your blog. Your writing is inspirting me to pick up the pen and paper again. I used to write...I think it's time to bring it back and spill my heart to pages once again.

Eddie Bluelights said...

Merry Christmas, Brian ~ Eddie

Tina said...

Happy Christmas brilliant Brian!! Sending you warm wishes for a happy new year!

sheila said...

Awwwweee.

Hope you are having a marvelously beautiful day!

Corrie Howe said...

And reading your wonderful work has made my days. Thanks for sharing your words.

books,coffee,etc.... said...

Merry Christmas!
Brian,
I must admit while reading your post I thought the lady in flight was a thief, but I see that she lost her wallet.
What a nice post...I hope that you and your family, have a happy and safe New Year too!
DeeDee ;-D

books,coffee,etc.... said...

Brian said,"I hope all of you have a magical holiday season. You give me smiles each day with your comments, emails and the occasional phone call. Knowing you is one gift that won't fit under my tree. Thank you. ~Brian
Brian~
You're very welcome!
DeeDee ;-D

Marianna said...

Happy Holidays to you and your wonderful family! Health and happiness!

Your blog made 2009 special Brian! take care and keep up the great work!

xoxo

Hilary said...

A beautiful post, Brian.. leaving me enchanted, as always.

I hope you had a wonderful Christmas. I'm glad I found your blog this year. :)

the walking man said...

well said Brian hope it was all you desired and your desires were well met.

Lisa said...

I love that you can take a simple situation and and turn it into an extraordinary and moving story.
Well done.

Ace said...

I have also met some very dear friends blogging! It is an outstanding medium.

Wings said...

Merry Christmas Brian, to you and your family! And a great 2010!

kys said...

I hope you and your family had a very Merry Christmas!

I'm so glad to have found your blog. You are a wonderful writer and a heck of a guy, too. All the best to you and your family in the coming new year.

Colette Amelia said...

Brian it is always a treat to see you and your comments! thank you for all your time, compassion, cheer and enthusiasm!

I always leave here feeling full!

Margie said...

Oh, how lovely to read this before heading to bed!
Loved it!
How did you ever learn to write so very beautifully?
And you are so diversified!
Just amazing!
Thanks always for the visits1


Margie :)