Like a stream bending around immovable rocks, passer-bys flowed around them. Whispered words passed between them, inaudible as he drew close to her ear, and thunder echoed off the walls of the city.
The stars dimmed, their flames snuffed and her eyes added their salt to the hard, wet curb. Horns blared as she dashed into their slow stampede, escaping to farther shores, losing herself in the crowded sea of faces.
Stoic statue, he watches her flee, then turns, retreating, his red umbrella bobbing along into the blackest of nights. His eyes, the only dry land in an otherwise dreary scene.
What were the words that made their world turn? What tension tore them apart rather than face it together?
Honesty creates opportunity for intimacy, but only when we are ready to hear.
Coffee warms me. Another sip, a touch on the hand, breaks the spell of the scene out the storefront window. Hands clasp, the look in her smile. Small blessings, sheltered inside, away from the storm.
Coffee warms me. Another sip, a touch on the hand, breaks the spell of the scene out the storefront window. Hands clasp, the look in her smile. Small blessings, sheltered inside, away from the storm.

16 comments:
I'm telling you, write a book!
Lovely, Brian. How true those words are.
I live vicariously through you in moments like this. Ahh, maybe someday, maybe again.
@otin - working on it
@ronda - ty. (smiles)
@daniel - i live vicariously through you when reading your hare krishna posts. whats up with the rabbits recently.
The mystery of another life.
CJ xx
Brian, your timing is impeccable.
OH! I feel A Bob Dylan song.......... bouncing around in my Head!.Great Prose Brian.Enjoy Your Coffee!
Hum..really...truely..wonderful!Yes you're a talented man!Your way of writing is just unique!
Have a nice day!
Beautiful. (((sigh)))
You've got talent, Brian. Love it.
I agree with otin, Brian, get that book written.
What a great post, and how very, very true! Hope you have a good day :-)
You have a great talent, masterful with prose.
Brian I am a proud reader of yours! More!!
lol
xoxo
@marianna - ty. smiles.
@harold - thanks for stopping by. glad you enjoyed. will check out your blog.
@dot com - not too winded from teh race to post a comment...lol. hope you had a great day as well!
@valerie - ty. working on it.
@willow - smiles. definitely a compliment coming from you.
@candi - ty. unique...hmmm.
@tony - always comes back to Dylan...
@crystal - hope you have a great day! mysteries waiting to be unravelled...
What a great writing style.
Very profound, and I find myself wondering the same thing:
What were the words that made their world turn? What tension tore them apart rather than face it together?
Honesty creates opportunity for intimacy, but only when we are ready to hear.
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